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| KHLegacy chapter 8 . 10/10/2013
Awesome I got a laugh at the part where Sparx messed up Drazious's name I can't wait to see what's next!
| KHLegacy chapter 7 . 7/22/2013
Sweet another story back from the dead I can't wait for more but take your time so it's even more epic good chapter I loved Sparx's lines in this
| KHLegacy chapter 6 . 4/23/2013
Sweet I didn't think this would updated I can't wait for the next chapter I liked the term scardeyfly for Sparx
| KHLegacy chapter 5 . 11/28/2012
Yeah they found Larza but it seems the Dark Master is back good chapter please update soon!
| KHLegacy chapter 4 . 11/28/2012
To the shattered planes huh I feel bad some of the young Dragons died good chapter though
| KHLegacy chapter 3 . 11/28/2012
I wonder what's happening in Avalar good chapter
| KHLegacy chapter 2 . 11/28/2012
ahh poor Zyra I and Infernous he is much too serious good chapter
| KHLegacy chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
So did Spyro and Cynder die I love the beginning good chapter
| joshua chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
just so you know spyro & cynder were still alive in the end of the legend of spyro dawn of the dragon ps i am really sure that if spyro & cynder had a offspring that it would be a mix between them not just in color but also in features
| Cyclone Sword chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
Ok, let's point some things out.
"The dark lord had been defeated..." It's the Dark Master
"As the elder dragon I watch over the dragons and maintained the peace" You used two verbal tenses. Write it in present or in past, but not both. "As the elder dragon I watch (watched) over the dragons and maintain (maintained) peace"
"reminded me of Cyinder the way" You wrote Cynder wrong
Well, that's all for now. I'm hoping to see more of your story in the future.