Reviews for Seven Sins
ErifStarTK chapter 27 . 8/22
Hi there!

Ive actually been REALLY enjoying the story thus far. I think what i like most is the atmosphere that's set (with nice descriptions of various settings) and the different ways the characters are portrayed in this universe (and not just inputing their normal canon selves into a new environment). I was a bit bummed to see you're discontinuing this version, but i am looking forward to seeing what you do with the rewrite!

Keep up the great work,
~ Eri
catslife30 chapter 27 . 7/24
Welcome back
I wanna say that this story is the best one that I've read in my life when you stopped updating it I was very sad. I was very happy about your return and you say the you wanna re-write the whole thing?!
I said OK maybe he will improve it a little bit(even though it was fine the way it was) and also you you'll make it a bi-weekly fanfic and yet its been a week and still no update
I mean common man you're only rewriting your own story I don't see how that could be hard
soo update it soon OK!?
SubXero chapter 27 . 7/15
i don't mind the hiatus but restarting from chapter 1 hurts especially since some of us have been waiting many years for a conclusion.
samuraipanda85 chapter 27 . 7/15
Holy shit. I NEVER thought I'd hear from you again.
I gotta say I'm disappointed that you wanna rewrite it.
I don't know what you dislike about it, I thought it was golden, especially the characterization. Although maybe that was just me.
Whatever, great to have you back. Now if you'll excuse me. I've got to go read your rewrite.
Tempestuous Ocean chapter 7 . 2/11
This story seemed interesting at first. But then.

- There are too many mysteries uncovered, and it's chapter 7 already. The promise to explain them got old.
- Every emotion feels flat. All tell, no show. Adverbs like jealously, angrily is all over the place. It would have been better to show emotions through actions.

Sakura's characterization is surprisingly awful, even though her 'tragic' past and newfound desires. I really hate indecision. And I hate foreshadow like the one Hinata did in this chapter: "You must care for each other deeply" or something like that.

Let's leave aside my deep, passionate hatred of NaruSaku for a moment. Is Sakura so thick that she can't see that she keeps giving Naruto false hope? Also, I know it is popular in Romance genre, but Naruto's deep love for someone who doesn't love him back (for the moment at least) is one of my least popular tropes. And frankly, it is a bit creepy. Also, I can explain it in a loooooong review, but I won't do that now. Long story short, I hate love triangles, therefore the one in this story killed my eagerness to continue reading.

I hoped Hinata would pull Naruto's head out of his a***, but that way seems closed too. Now, it is all predictable. NaruSaku at the end, once Sakura figures out what she wants and overcomes her inner problems.

Another thing is that this story seems to be abandoned. In the A/N at the beginning of the last chapter, you hinted that Naruto's true nature is yet to be revealed. So, I decided not to set myself up for disappointment. I won't read ahead.
sharmahomanshu chapter 1 . 3/16/2016
Yo man I'm a big fan of your fanficsthis one is undeniably my favourite fanfic EVER ! This is really really cool . Your character developmentplot direction is unbeatable tbh . I know you aren't gonna read it in the first place but I wanna show my gratitude to your works in the fanfiction community . Your fics are really underrated but whoever reads them gets hooked instantlylike me XD. I hope you finish this fic if you're alive man , I'm really patiently waiting for its updatefrankly I never get excited too easily on something . We can consider this as your retirement fic ... Please UPDATE ! NARUSAKUalltheway
Guest chapter 26 . 2/21/2016
I really really really like this story, forced myself to finish it within a few days. Hope you can update soon and keep up the good work!
Guest chapter 26 . 2/17/2016
When is chapter 27,28,29... Coming?
Guest chapter 8 . 1/15/2016
Naruto is just to much of a bitch in this story not even canon made him this pathetically weak bitch.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/15/2016
So both jiraiya and tsunade knew naruto was eventually going to kill imperials with anbu and prepares him by...not teaching him anything and making him a pacifist? Are they stupid?! Dafuck man?! Is he going to patronise and hug Madara to death or is Sasuke going to do everything again?!
CRuck chapter 26 . 12/15/2015
A truly incredible tale, i'm not one for AU but this is addictive
CRuck chapter 13 . 12/15/2015
Loved the Kenshin reference
CRuck chapter 2 . 12/14/2015
Wow, what a story! Very intriguing premise and i love the interaction between naruto and sasuke, rivals no matter the universe, but despite their personality clashes, they share a deep understanding of each other
Maddog631 chapter 26 . 10/5/2015
I read this story very quickly and I love it. It is probably one of my favorite story's of all time. I am really looking forword to the next update. Though it would make more sense for amaru to be the pairing. I don't really care because you have not really done any romance for 25 chapters so it doesn't matter.
samuraipanda85 chapter 25 . 4/11/2015
I wanna claim ownership of the 10 years question review for chapter 26. Just in case you wanna answer me.
Till then I eagerly await chapter 27.
Cheers.
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