|Reviews for Fate Extra: The Midnight Sea|
| Renji chapter 12 . 3/12
A very fun chapter to read. The new way to find the treasure and slow down Shinji was very interesting to read and the item in the chest make me wonder if you have plans for the future with them. The moment before Casters room change was so funny her breaking the fourth wall and what future 'encouragement' will she use. Next chapter I have a feeling is going to be very exiting. Also it sounds like you read the manga Fate Extra have you read Fate/Extra Fox Tail as well? For fans who read the reviews the translation for both can be found at . Thank-you once again for another exceptional chapter.
| swane1990 chapter 12 . 3/2
Nice work as always. I particularly enjoy the master servant interaction. I am looking forward to the battle next chapter.
| StrawBook chapter 12 . 3/2
I am really liking how this story progresses. Soon it will be the seventh day when it will be a true matter of Life or Death for our dear Hakuno. I always wait for the next installment of this story. One of the things I look forward to every month.
| GreyMan19 chapter 12 . 3/2
Mother of god, the Kaeidostick is here. I can imagine an omake of ether Rin or Caster trying to use it, how gr-disastrous the effects will be. His moral quandary is sensible at this point with more coming after the week.
Seems like all of the npcs are becoming more self-aware with all of these things happening, reminds me a bit of CCC to an extent.
| Mr. Haziq chapter 12 . 3/2
Piratit... Good one. I like it!
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/2
Manaka… as in Fate/Prototype's Manaka Sajyou, or at least an expy of her. The description seems to match her well in any event.
I'm guessing she'll reveal some yandere / psychotic tendencies / get driven mad with thoughts of revenge after Shun inevitably gets killed in the upcoming arena battle. And I wouldn't be surprised if she was one of Mihara's opponents in a subsequent round.
| Youmu Konpaku chapter 12 . 3/2
Wooooo Yay for update!
Anyways, it was nice to see how close the competition between the three of them was. Each character played to their strengths and advantages which was frankly done quite well. And while Shinji's not wholly incompetent, I still hate him.
NPC alongside Mihara and Caster and Saber interactions are jolly good fun and a nice break from all the srsbsns. And lastly, angst and doubt. Not too much, but rather just enough.
| StrawBook chapter 7 . 2/19
I beg of thee... continue with this well made story. I constantly find myself intrigued no matter how many times I have read it.
So I ask you as a fan and a follower...Please continue.
| NikyoMan670 chapter 11 . 2/17
Great story! Please hope you update soon, I am anxiously waiting.
| Renji chapter 11 . 1/16
Thank-you for another great chapter. As for the questions: I for-one have enjoyed the slice-of-life it builds depth to the characters in a different way then game. The 'couple' have stolen Shinji's spotlight but because of the way you presented them by making them fun and knowing the most likely future makes reading about them more appealing. I do wonder how Manaka will change in week two. As for Caster antics they, I think, are fine for now. The way she acts at present fits her to the letter but as the war goes on more of her character can be flushed out by these antic as well as her past. Caster is just fun to read every time she shows up. Also thought Saber eating the melon was funny. Please continue and thanks for the servant sheets.
| Saint Nick chapter 11 . 1/9
My only recommendation is to try and keep it a close to one chapter per day as you can, instead of one day taking up multiple chapters. Fate extra consists of seven weeks, so at the minimum with what you've already written, that'll add up to fifty something chapters. You don't want to burn yourself out. Other than that keep up the good work! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
| M.Etzel chapter 2 . 1/8
Aw, Initial Protagonist never manages to survive no matter how many times I go through the prologue. :'(
This is very exciting, lengthy though it was.
| GraveBreaker chapter 11 . 1/6
Pretty good chapter this time around.
Looks like you've finally hinted at the Formal Wear. Interested in seeing what you do there.
Loving the interaction between Caster and Mihara. So much innuendo. And the T-Settings joke, heheh.
I wouldn't say that there are any problems with how you're writing this now. Just keep up the good work.
Well, looking forward to what comes next.
| LL chapter 11 . 1/6
Nice to see an new chapter! Heh wouldn't be suprised if Caster was right about Sakura being her rival, wonder if BB will appear in this fanfic as I don't know much about her except she appear in Fate CCC which if I had the real holy grail would wish that and Dragon quest 7 3DS was coming to the that she has hem, bigger assets than Sakura and look like her too.
Was amusing that Mihara almost got Saber to reveal her name.
Oh well, such perils are frought in the quest to obtain the holy grail war.
| GreyMan19 chapter 11 . 1/6
The slice-of-life is a great addition to the story. It gives more depth for everyone in this and gives us a deeper look into what SERAPH could have been outside of combat. The couple haven't really stolen Shinji's spotlight, with what little he has and you've given. His charcter was very vain, if that's the right word, to me and his death solidify that.
Is it just me or are you making the masters interact in a way that delude themselves to the fact that a death game is happening?
Anyway, can't wait to see Caren pop up. Caster's antics helps ease the tension so it's welcome.