Reviews for Help! I'm Stuck in a Story!
GXY-2013 chapter 6 . 10/23/2014
Continue, this please.
Another Man chapter 6 . 1/29/2013
Hmm I wonder how I missed this update?

For something you wrote with no aim, this has been great! I love how horrible things can go, but specifically I demand MOAR of Human X's adventures!
Gray Shadow chapter 5 . 1/16/2013
Whoops! Sorry about that last review under my name. I was going to make a comment about Marisa's logic, but things got out of hand, as I am reviewing this on a smartphone.

Concerning the story, though, this is hilarious. Keep going.
Gray Shadow chapter 5 . 1/16/2013
"'Synonymous to Paradise on Earth... so, in symbollic terms, a piece of Heaven is cast down to forge a bond between a couple," Marisa continues. "Such a piece must be sacrificed from Heaven... da ze. In this case, the portion of Heaven that falls victim is... Bhava-Agra, residence of Tenshi and the Hinanawi clan.'"
shadowmccloud chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
I ate while reading spicy things, and now I was dyslexic.
Sonanoka21093 chapter 5 . 1/10/2013
Could always have a nudist find the shirt. A match made in... in... ...somewhere unpleasant. Anywho, keep up the seemingly random work!
Nicolas Crossworth chapter 4 . 1/7/2013
YOU’RE BACK!Sanae must be working hard. good to have you back. best of to your future chaptdrs.
Another Man chapter 4 . 1/7/2013

Rinnosuke became a grouchy old hag like Yukari? That sounds forbidden. Keep it coming, I missed this story.
Sonanoka21093 chapter 4 . 1/7/2013
Ohh, I for one am quite fine with a lack of direction! Do keep up the lovely work, and I can't wait to see Morichiko, and her experiences! ...Obviously she'll end up enjoying herself in the end, and then suddenly become male again. Or not. Anywho, I look forward to what happens next! I've missed this fanfic, even if I forgot about it.
Another Man chapter 3 . 8/4/2012
You should totally write the script for the next Touhou M-1 Grand Prix about reimu's incident with her new milk apparel.

Three letters to describe this fix: L O L

Very original, I loved it! Keep this up!
Remnant Jett chapter 3 . 8/1/2012
I completely agree with Sonanoka, but also make Human Z unable to understand what anyone says. Plus, why not have Youki suddenly appear and have him challenge Human X to a sword fight?
What? You said you wanted ideas? There's your butter.
("Playing with Yukari's gaps is so much fun!" I died when Yuyuko said that. :D )
Sonanoka21093 chapter 3 . 7/31/2012
Ask and ye shal recieve! As you asked for it, I'll now start dumping things on you. There's probably ideas in there somewhere, too! DUN DUN DUN Have another outsider come about, who is the generic "I'm stronger than everyone" sort of sue! Name him... Human Z! And have him use the kamehameha. What? You did ask, so stop looking at me like that...
FeeptheNinja chapter 2 . 7/27/2012

But no seriously I burst out laughing like a maniac. This is gold, /gold/ I say!

As an aside, this was me during the whole eating sequence:



Ohhhh... she's gonna /eat Reimu/... BD


Aw man, she just ate her clothes? Come on, I thought it was gonna be yuri! D:

Pikachu: ... you wanted it to be? BD

Me: You know damn well I wanted it to be. :c

... anyway.
Mephiles666 chapter 2 . 7/26/2012
Actually, it wasn't a bad joke.
Mephiles666 chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
I laughed.
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