|Reviews for Oh Brother|
| sarahlouise80 chapter 12 . 2/19/2013
Bye bye Lauren hahaha fab hot!
| Evelyne-raconte chapter 13 . 2/19/2013
How sweet, this chapter his, without any hint of drama. Nice. Thank you.
| nessa01 chapter 13 . 2/19/2013
Omg i loved everybit of that chapter!
Cant wait for the next one!
| ripmic chapter 13 . 2/19/2013
charlie gift was awesome,girl,edward,no esmeis spot on lol,love it. this story is awesome can't wait for the next chapter.
| debslmac chapter 13 . 2/19/2013
| SarahCullenxxx chapter 13 . 2/19/2013
Haha, great reference back to the cookies ;P Hmm, I want to be contrary and say she is having twins and so there will be one of each but surely they would be told that at one of their ultrasounds so I will say that the baby is a girl... no, a boy... no actually, girl... Argh! I don't know! Great start to Christmas :) Look forward to ther next chapter :)
Much love as always
| queen cullen0527 chapter 13 . 2/18/2013
I still think twins. One of each.
| snoopylover60 chapter 13 . 2/18/2013
LOL... Lucky Charlie, a new boat and truck..
Love this story.
| apryl.hassler1 chapter 13 . 2/18/2013
love this. i love charlie's gift. I rhink edward is right about the kid being a is funny that mom starting talking about the tainted 't wait for the next part of chirstmas.
| tawelephant chapter 13 . 2/18/2013
Jasper's little slip of the tongue makes it sound like Miss Alice is pregnant. Fingers crossed.
I just love love love this story!
Can't wait to see what everyone got for Christmas.
And I hope Edward is right and they have a little girl. :)
| momma2fan chapter 13 . 2/18/2013
Please tell me that Christmas isn't gonna be ruined by the likes of skanks!
| ellaryne chapter 13 . 2/18/2013
| jm1708 chapter 13 . 2/18/2013
so much fun
| alc1002 chapter 13 . 2/18/2013
| Kell-an Dial chapter 13 . 2/18/2013
OK HERES THE THING.
THERE ARE WAY TOO MANY MISTAKES WHETHER THEY ARE SPELLING OR PUNCTUATION, I AM SICK OF YOUR CHARACTERS ALL GETTING MARRIED IN VEGAS, I AM SICK OF THEM ALL BEING PREGNANT AROUND THE SAME TIME AS WELL. ALSO I HAVE NOTICED THAT YOU HAVE BEEN COPING AND PASTING CHAPTERS FROM SOME OF YOUR OTHER STORIES TO MAKE CHAPTERS UP OR TO USE AS FILL IN FOR CHAPTERS.
YOU CAN BITCH, MOAN AND COMPLAIN ALL YOU LIKE! BUT THE ONE THING YOU SHOULD NOT DO IS BLAME YOUR PRE-READERS AS THEY ARE ONLY THERE FOR SUPPORT NOT TO FIX YOUR MISTAKES ESPECIALLY SPELLING MISTAKES THEY ARE ALL YOUR FAULT NOT THEIRS.
I AM NOT AT THE POINT I AM GOING TO REMOVE YOU FROM MY FAVOURITES CAUSE I AM SICK AND TIRED OF YOU STARTING NEW STORIES AND NOT FINISHING OFF YOUR OLD STORIES. I THINK YOU HAVE AT LEAST 4 WIP ONE THAT I REFUSE TO READ CAUSE YOU HAVE OTHERS THAT NEED TO BE FINISHED. I ALSO HAVE TO SAY I HATE THE WAY YOU HAVE FINISHED OFF THE OTHER STORIES JUST SO YOU CAN START A NEW ONE.
ALSO I HAVE TO TELL YOU THAT YOU ARE LOSING READERS ( I KNOW OF AT LEAST 7 PEOPLE WHO HAVE REMOVED YOU FROM THEIR FAVOURITE WRITER AND STORIES AND I BET YOUR WHOLE ATTITUDE WILL BE WHO GIVES A DAMN) BECAUSE YOU REALLY JUST DONT GIVE A SHIT ABOUT YOUR WRITING ANY MORE. I AM SICK OF DEFENDING YOU TO PEOPLE I HAVE TOLD THEM IF THEY DONT LIKE WHAT YOU WRITE GIVE KIM HONEST REVIEWS DONT SEND HER PRIVATE MESSAGES AS SHE WONT ANSWER. WHEN YOU STARTED WRITING YOU ASKED ME TO ALWAYS BE HONEST WHEN I REVIEW, WELL WHEN I GIVE HONEST REVIEWS YOU GET THE SHITS WITH ME, YOU CANT HAVE IT BOTH WAYS YOU WITH WANT HONEST REVIEWS OR YOU WANT PEOPLE WHO TELL YOU LIES WELL SORRY TO SAY I TELL THE TRUTH LIKE YOU ASKED ME TOO. IF YOU DONT LIKE IT TELL ME BUT DONT GO BITCHING THAT I HAVE BEEN UNFAIR JUST BECAUSE I TELL YOU THE TRUTH.
YOU NEED TO PULL YOUR HEAD OUT OF YOUR ARSE AND START CARING ABOUT WHAT YOU ARE WRITING ABOUT BEFORE YOU LOSE ALL YOUR READERS