|Reviews for A Twilight Fan Reads 'Brewdening Love'|
| CaribbeanTrinidadian chapter 2 . 6/20/2013
I think I am getting pissed off without the amount of errors and horrible, dreadful ,tasteless grammar she is using, I can't go pass Chapter 2. It has literally been the worst 3 minutes of my life reading this. I might lose more brain cells if I can continue, I understand why you wanted us to read this trash, because its utter shit and blasphemy...sigh.
| RandomCritic chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
Marvelous commentary there! I applaud your sense. As for the author, please tell her to fix these shit and have her take anything involving religion out. (Especially the Mary Magdalene part.) Anyway beautiful commentary and once again you have received my respect.
| anonymousisthewaytogo chapter 2 . 3/23/2013
This is looking like the My Immortal of the Twilight fandom...
… Oh, dear Lord, I can't read this anymore. My brain is hurting.
| pink penguins chapter 31 . 8/21/2012
hehhe im kind of a twilight anti but i have a guilty fondness of twilight and wow this chick just replaced bella with her own character
| Guest chapter 19 . 8/18/2012
Lol! Your commentary is hilarious! Erin combines just about everything I dislike in fanfiction, Mary Sues, religion (or, in her case blasphemy), and the overuse of swearing. Lol
| 1HOPE2LOVE3PEACE4WEALLNEEDIT chapter 26 . 8/18/2012
is it really that bad. it couldnt have been that bad. im twelve and i spell better that her, hell my 2 grader cousin spells better than that. i mean dang that was just horrible. ugh i have to bleach my brain. you are funny though and very right, so i guess that makes it better.
love, 1234 WE ALL NEED IT
| Panda Bandit chapter 7 . 8/18/2012
Oh. my. god. Probably the worst story I have ever read! I swear my IQ went down while reading this!
| Demetrius's Sadist chapter 3 . 8/18/2012
I dont really like this girl but I do not wish death upin her..maybe PAIN but not death
| 1HOPE2LOVE3PEACE4WEALLNEEDIT chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
I am so sorry you had to read that crap. It really is horrible. Im with you all the way
| Randomreader chapter 12 . 8/6/2012
Gosh!...i lost 5 points of my this erin locklea 8 years old?...i love ur erin reads it.
| Aurora Reinette chapter 4 . 8/6/2012
I love your comments so far, but I believe you missed one. Like the fact Edward giggled. EDWARD GIGGLED? EDWARD DOESN'T GIGGLE! I'm not a Twilight fan but even I know that Edward doesn't... (shudder)... giggle.
Just thought I'd point it out. (:
| ReneeGoetz chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
I put off actually reading this because I thought, I wouldn't want someone making fun of something I wrote in public like that.
But... I completely see where you're coming from. That was painful. Not just the horrible descriptions and typos, but are we really writing an entire story in text message shorthand with a ghetto accent? But then, she's so "HAWT" so I guess she can get away with it.
I love your commentary, but the rest is just so painful, I'm not sure I can actually read it. I think I lost an IQ point or two.
Does she know you're doing this?
| Super Sonic Death Turtle chapter 10 . 8/4/2012
This is to funny, when I first started reading Brewdening love I thought it was a parody guess not. Anywho just wanted to let you know I think your comentary is fantastic and I'm loving it.
| kgryfferinclawpuff98 chapter 2 . 8/4/2012
I am not a big fan of Twilight, actually, I rather dislike it...but this Erin's THIS peice of shit is making me appreciate it a bit...
Why the hell did I read it?
Your commentary is good, but the actual story! GAH!
-goes back to the Harry Potter section-
| Ice-cream-and-cake-cake chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
I just felt like IQ dropped about 20... That's sad..