Reviews for The Black Swan: Jasper & Bella Pairing
Guest chapter 4 . 10/27
never did like how self-destructive she became or how he became her world, reeked of sappy fake teen romance between a girl who raised her self and and old vamp. Never made sense still doesnt i was hoping she would wolf out but this slow build of her healing is irritating because to me she is weak to be so broken for a person. thats the cliche romance between teens that live in a bubble not independent bella or old edward
anisha2007 chapter 4 . 10/15
And you said “in the north there was no shared experience with blacks as there was in the south”. As I stated before, there was not a shared experience between blacks and in the south either. One group was brutally enslaved, the other was free. They did not have a shared experience. Please excuse all of my spelling error, I just noticed them in the previous message
anisha2007 chapter 1 . 10/15
This has been an interesting story so far, but I am a little concerned about your interpretation of the civil war. This a glorified revised version of history that began to rise during the Jim Crow era and told within the white supremacy groups. The South was not fighting for individual rights, they were fighting for the rights to own slaves. This was written explicitly in their declarations of succession, in the Confederacy’s constitutions, and in states’ constitutions. As matter of fact, further proof that they did not necessarily believe in states rights, lies in the fact that part of the reason they left was because they did not like that the northern states did not have or enforce fugitive slave laws, which would have been the northern states rights. It is just concerning that would try to make a false equivalency of the reasons both sides went to war. It’s similar to comparing Nazis to the people that fought against them. Jasper being a glorified Confederate soldier has always bothered me in Twilight in general, I hate that this was not really discussed. That being said, I hope you research the topic yourself, and don’t believe the white washed version of history it seems you have been taught. Also, there was a large black population in the North, even if it was not as big as in the South. And, at no time in our nation’s history were slaves treated as brutally as they were just before and during the Civil War, so it wasn’t like they were being treated okay.
Lmadams chapter 2 . 8/10
I love this story so much and I've read it a few times . Are you planning on finishing it ?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/14
More chapters please
Guest chapter 28 . 7/12
I LOVE Bruno Mars' "It will Rain". I've only ever heard it in the credits to...can't remember if it was New Moon or Eclipse. I always think it is so sly and playful of fanfiction writers to insert little "jabs" at the movies in their works. One story (can't remember the name) had Bella's Guardian Angel appear to her as Rob Pattinson "just like the actor in that Vampire movie!" -tongue firmly in cheek.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/11
Are you a "Jonny Quest" fan? that is the only other context in which I've come across the term Loup-Garous.
Lmadams chapter 1 . 4/21
Hello lovely. You are an extremely talented at your craft. Bravo, well done! I enjoy your writing tremendously, you are very descriptive. I waist this was a movie so I could watch your imagery unfold on the big screen. Now my question to you is will you be finishing this journey? I know that life can get crazy busy at times but I was really looking forward to seeing how this ended in your minds eye. If you read this please let me know. I look forward to hearing from you. Xoxo Linda
Guest chapter 1 . 3/7
Great story! But could you maybe finish it please big please with puppy dog eyes I'm asking.
vagabond77 chapter 55 . 2/22
I so wish they would be finished.
kassiesbeach chapter 56 . 1/8
You put so much hard work and effort into this story. It is well thought out with only a few continuity errors. I'm kind of sad you did not finish. I enjoyed it, all the same! I am highly impressed by the research that must have gone into this. So many languages, cities, countries, histories, the mythological parts. Just wow!
kassiesbeach chapter 10 . 1/5
Vanderbilt is in Nashville not Memphis. Great story so far though. I'm liking Leah. She could be a cool friend.
catjumped1 chapter 56 . 11/1/2016
Great story, is there any more?
Guest chapter 7 . 7/30/2016
Thank-you so much for many reasons regarding this story but ATM, thanks especially, for not making Peter and Jasper speak like inbred people. Truly, thanks. I'm from the south of The States and I am all for a sexy, supernatural southerner but when folks start misspelling and misusing words; to me it always turns out sounding like a bad Swedish accent. "Yah"? Lol
Thanks again, Ash Somber
Sandra46 chapter 56 . 7/7/2016
I have truly enjoyed this story.. But I have just realized this is your last posting... Can you let me know if you are going to finish it? Or is it the end?. Thanks x
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