|Reviews for The Mentalist: Red Haze|
| LouiseKurylo chapter 11 . 3/2
It would have been a much different series had RJ died early on. OTOH, it was a joyful alternative universe for Lisbon and Jane to enjoy each other (in all senses) so early (yeah! the tv series has still not gotten there) and for Jane to sidestep 12 years of obsession and pain. Thanks for writing it.
| fbiwoman223 chapter 11 . 12/27/2012
Dang, your stories are positively addicting! Not only did I not get any housework done, now I'm way past my bedtime! Could you please not write so well so I could have a little self control over here? ;) In all seriousness, I really am loving your fics. Your characterization, even in AU, is still spot on to what I imagine would happen in the show if these situations were to appear there.
I also appreciate your use of punctuation, grammar, and paragraphs! I know that may sound silly, but for me, that is just as important as content. There is nothing that gives me a bigger headache than trying to read a story that is one large paragraph with run on sentences, spelling and grammatical errors. I'm getting a small one just thinking about them! :)
Sooo, on that note, I am going to attempt to get some sleep. Or maybe I'll try to squeeze in just one more story. :) Until next time...
| janesbiotch chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
Yea i hate situations like that but i know that you need this as a start of a good fic so it was good. I can't wait to see what happens next so i am on to the next chapter.
| crazyanaylst chapter 2 . 10/24/2012
Everytime I see Patrick Jane eat a sandwich pulled from his red gift bag I always imagine it is a Vegamite sandwich. Now sure why - I just do.
| Guest chapter 10 . 10/10/2012
This was wonderful.
| csiAngel chapter 11 . 9/15/2012
I loved this fic :D Very well done!
| Mossi.b chapter 11 . 9/13/2012
This was a lovely thing to find on my return from holiday, thank you
I enjoyed this story, i know it didn't follow the line of the show, but might have beens are fun too!
I guess as you say if this really had happened in the show, it wouldn't have been a very long series...but I like nice things to happen to those two.
Once again thanks
| C. S. Tolkien chapter 11 . 9/13/2012
Finally the last chapter, I love first season fic with romantic relationship between the two, but there very little of that.
You nned to change to complete.
| UseYourWords chapter 11 . 9/11/2012
That was really great! I'm so glad you saved Jane so many years of misery! And Jane and Lisbon so obviously belong together. Kudos to you!
| Shani8 chapter 11 . 9/10/2012
This was lovely, as always! :) Yeah... you did scare me for a minute there, and made me hyperventilate, but it turned out ok, so it's all GOOD! ;)
I find your writing is more or less like a drug Donna, and boy am I HOOKED! )) I can't wait to read more of Taming of the Psychic, and I look forward to your take on this season.
P.S. I did check out "Scratched" and what can I say except that Waterbaby has done it again. It's just FABULOUS! :D
| waterbaby134 chapter 11 . 9/10/2012
Perfect ending. Romantic AND realistic. And so ends another stunning fic from you. I don't know how you keep churning out all these brilliant stories; you truly have a gift. Thanks for the shout-out too!
| 9900girl chapter 11 . 9/10/2012
It was a wonderful and the end is perfect ;)
| Water-please chapter 11 . 9/10/2012
Wow - what an ending! Love your story!
LOLed at your comment "because in this universe, what I say goes." :D
| youshinebright chapter 11 . 9/10/2012
No. Noooo no. I will not accept that this fic is over.
I will eventually move on, like I did with Scarlet Woman, but for now I will mourn.
I did feel a little shocked when Patrick walked out, but I knew he'd be back, but I didn't think it would be so soon. He needed her. It's what he wanted. :')
I applaud you for another brilliant fic. Beautifully and realistically (in regards to their personalities) written as always.
| Special Agent Baker chapter 11 . 9/9/2012
The perfect ending to a perfect story. I never cease to be amazed at the fact that the words you write can transport me right into the story and make me one of the characters.