|Reviews for Little Seer|
| krnegi91 chapter 38 . 23h
The MC has a few annoying characteristics & isnt too bright in the common sense dept.
Other than that, great story.. :)
| Anon chapter 38 . 3/24
Beautiful. Ending sucked tho
| lizzywv chapter 8 . 2/22
I don't normally write wright reviews but I have to say this story is wonderful and I hope you will continue with it eventually.
| Siebenschlaefer chapter 38 . 1/11
I really enjoyed your story. Great characterizations and storyline. Unique approach to a ‚special‘ Harry, but please tell me you will write a sequel some day. The end is killing me, will Severus wake up? How is Britain now without the rebels?
| Calmzone1 chapter 18 . 12/31/2017
I am enjoying your story, but I find the errors to be very frustrating. I hope someone can take the time to clear them up. Every chapter so far has words used that are close but incorrect. Those of us with editor brains find it both annoying and rpfrustrating that the language is mangled so much. I’m sure if it was written in another language, they would be equally frustrated reading the errors.
Story is well thought out and laid out, and the characters ar fairly reasonably structured based on their actions. I’m really enjoying it otherwise, (I do know another writer who has someone edit her stories after writing and when I’ve gone back in to re-read it, I find way more errors that I know weren’t there before as I have an almost eidetic memory for written words. Perhaps that happens with your work also.)
| Lil Hamari chapter 38 . 12/14/2017
Please please tell me their is a sequel or an aftermath of Severus
In all honesty I loved this story and hope for more future stories of yours
| Mariash chapter 1 . 11/18/2017
Hello! I would like to translate your work into Russian for ficbook. Could you contact me() and give me permission to translation?
| Eagle-Eyes chapter 38 . 11/1/2017
Keep writing as life allows
| mymi092 chapter 3 . 10/20/2017
I was reading the note at the end, and i don't know if you already read it but Nightmare is a very good hermione/tom its one of my favourite
| ScriosAisling chapter 12 . 10/6/2017
I find it highly amusing that Lord Voldemort is a cat person. :P
| Gurgaraneth chapter 1 . 9/29/2017
Nice but wish tht severus had woken up in the end
| roseapplelovesflowers chapter 7 . 9/17/2017
hey just wanted to say I love your story. I even download it to my phone, favorited, followed you! here have a kitty! ฅ'ω'ฅ
| mayawene chapter 38 . 8/16/2017
wow thanks for this story and for your tile writing it
| Prabhleen Arora chapter 38 . 8/13/2017
Please Continue Soon...
| Devidakk chapter 38 . 8/4/2017
Lately I find many good fanfictions. Anyway... I really love it. Voldemort's relationship with Harry is in my opinion kinda too sweet and too little bitter, but it's okay, I still like it. Your writing style is great, makes reader curious, you can write mysteries, your potential is great, but you don't use it that much and ending is kinda messed. I mean, everything is too happy for one side, they also lost more than some people, Harry lost his friend and saw his body and then he just forgot about it, and after he came back from Order, he didn't even visited grave. Of course, there was many more important things, but it should mentioned, after all he was part of the group that helped Harry fit in. Also there wasn't any despair I like, and it's disappointing. Harry's in the Veil? Okay, but what happened with Severus and Voldemort while he was in everyone's knowledge dead? Did Potion Master was mad? Was he sad? Was he crying? And what with Draco? What were Voldemort's actions? Did he foud a way to bring Harry back? Did the tries failed? You ignored it almost completelyyou skipped it. You didn't even showed their reaction on Harry's comeback. Hence my disappointment. Also, part of your characters, mostly Order members are one-dimensional. You didn't showed Molly Weasley like person that took care of seven children so she knows how to deal with hormonal teenagers, no, you showed her as ignorant. She also should know more than well than to cut hair of someone who is not her child, it has no sense. Why she cared? I would understand if Harry have done something to her, something more to anger her, but then again... cutting hair, really? Also Black and Pottersthey are unnatural, like you just wrote them only thinking that you want to show how bad parents they are, but you should remember, that in canon James and Lily gave their lives for Harry to live and it shouldn't be ignored. Yes, they were bad parents, because they didn't left the war and chose to foolishly die than just run away to another countries, but that doesn't change the fact, that they stood by their son side until the end and Harry very well could be squib, but it was too early to see that. They also were in hiding until they died (still talking about canon) and it was for their son, otherwise they would be on battlefield. That means they loved Harry for who he was, their son. There really should be some more dilemma, maybe (here's my suggestion) Sirius when he was in cell opposite to Harry's could tell him about how his parents felt when they gave him up or how Lily argued with James that they won't give Harry up, and then James said that it would be uncomfortable for Harry to live with magic everywhere when he can't do it and that they are too deep within the war to be safe for their son to grow up, especially when he can't do magic and protect himself, then Lily could say that they can leave him with her sister instead of orphanage, because she believed that Petunia still loved her and would take good care of him. He could also mention something about how he reminds him about Lily, how he is stubborn and she sometimes also was like that, how she was also good with Potions because of Severus. There could be told some similarities between Harry and his parents, but that doesn't show that Harry is like them. It may be just genes and Sirius really should understand Harry better than everyone, because he also was born with expectations and he was trying to prove theory "Child is like their parents" wrong, but it could be done better. Maybe he was too nostalgic? But he wasn't that mad as you pictured him to be. And Harry might not believe it, but it would still show that they were not only antagonistic faceless marionettes posing as Harry's parents, but actual parents that made some bad decisions and felt bad with it. They all are just humans. Sirius also is too obsessed with James, it's unhealthy, they were only friends. In other words, your characters are unrealistic when you don't like them. And your writings are also lacking in certain emotions that I deem necessary for my opinion to be good. You haven't showed more perspectives that should be showed. You just ignored fragments that could change things and maybe make reader view situation in more lights than it was showed or even more lights than it really was. You could play more with reader's emotions leading them towards wrong conclusion only to surprise them. I could even say that Dumbledore was showed more mad than he was, he seemed delusional, but that's not completely right. You showed him as, I'll go as far as say, stupid. Because he fell for words of person that he hasn't even given Veritaserum to and was standing on Voldemort's side. Slughorn before he died could have left some, couldn't he? I love this fanfiction, I really do, but now when I ended reading it, I feel somehow blank. And it's not blank in sense that I feel empty and I feel like I lost important friend. Nope. I feel blank, like I won't miss it, but that it wasn't that bad read. It was somehow predictable, really. If I had to write how many points I would give it summarising, it would be 7,5/10. It's not masterpiece, but still on the list "good, but not enough to add to favourites".