Reviews for It Begins
ccase13 chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
This would be almost better for the poor brothers in that it would be over at the end rather than more years of loss.
OpheliacAngel chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Ooh, very much like this. Unique and well written and fantastic job :D
MeAzrael chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Oh Dorothy, what a disturbing image! Earth and sky, dark wings and wings of light, war and destruction everywhere, and our brothers in between - as always. Wonderful :-)
Hope you are alright and enjoying the summer!

xx Kate
TheYmp chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Yikes! Epic imagery, nicely done
Dizzo chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
Oooh, terrifying stuff. That, right there, is pure cataclysm. Love it :)
(Does that make me bad?)
Tifaching chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
What a terrifying visual. The imagery here is fantastic. Nicely done!
bezubaanphirse chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
They didn't stop the apocalypse?
How assuring. ;P

P.S. Still liked it. :3
Woman of Letters chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
I love your image of the demons as rabid crows. Very vivid. The portrait of the two of them together, standing between Heaven and Hell, is beautiful. I'd love to see an artist draw this - I bet it would make one amazing piece of fan art.
3DBABE1999 chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
Holy crap! This needs a sequel pronto!
Amberdreams chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
That was certainly a drabble-sized apocalypse! Well done on squeezing so much terror into the 100 words!
bhoney chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
Oooh, nice use of the word. I love the graphic, too-don't know if you made it for this story or not, but it's really pretty.
Madd Aless chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
Good Imagery
mainegirlwrites chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
Great job, very poetic prose! Best, mainegirlwrites
Vanessa Sgroi chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
Fantastic, just fantastic!
SupernaturallyEgocentric chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
Whoa! Good one!
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