|Reviews for What Passes On Elven Shores|
| Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
This poem, although lengthy, was very well-written. Although this poem does act, in some ways, free-verse, there were times when I caught the traditional poetry. These two lines, for instance, I liked how they did this:
"Does the sunshine burst behind the clouds brilliant like Gandalf's fireworks?
Do your gardens teem with flowers of the most beautiful kinds and colours?"
I know those didn't rhyme, in a way, but from the way it's worded it felt like more of a fixed poem. Throughout this poem, I noticed how, not only in character Sam was, but Sam's voice coming through, as if he were telling this to someone. In spite of Frodo not being present, it seemed throughout his presence was there.
Still, you did a fine job with this poem. If it's all right with you, I'd like to put your poem in my community.
| seafarer chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
| Frodo's sister chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
This is a sweet story. You captured Sam's personality well in this poem. You did make some punctuation errors though, and sentences generally do not begin with and.
| Saphirabrightscale chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
Beautiful, long but just epic! ;) Amazing and touching.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
This is really and truly amazing.
It reminded me again why I love Sam.
He's just so selfless and loyal.