Reviews for Oh Mother
HAZMOT chapter 5 . 1/9/2013
Tony is great with Chelsea and has proved he is quite the playmate. Chelsea is adorable and quite intuitive towards her mother about how dangerous Ray was as a father and husband. Ziva knows that she tried everything in her power to protect her from Ray. Only someone as sick and violent as Ray would use his own daughter to keep Ziva from leaving him and in line. Now it seems that Ray has showed up and wants his family back. If Tony and rest have anything to do with it, Ray is going to be sorry he would harm Ziva or Chelsea. :D
LauraMaeH94 chapter 5 . 1/9/2013
So, here is your hundreth review! I love this story.

One thing, who is Chelsea?

But yeah, anyway, PLEASE CONTINUE! Please?
SmellyThePirate chapter 5 . 1/9/2013
o_O Nice cliffhanger!
And Ziva correcting her daughter's idiom was so cute xD Like when she corrected Eli's idiom in last night's ep...crey...
New chapter soon, I hope.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/9/2013
who's Chelsea? And why did they not her Ray breaking into Tony's apartment? Update soon
livyisnotfromtheshire chapter 5 . 1/9/2013
0.0 My mind is blown! OMG! Just a quick question...whose Chelsea? An OC? Someone from Season 10? I haven't been able to watch it yet :(

But this is really good! Well done!

Oh btw, I kinda broke the charger to my phone, and said phone is out of battery power . Hopefully I'm getting the new phone charger on Saturday, but for now, no Kik or IG :'(

But yeah. Update soon!
-Livy xoxo
FaeMelody chapter 5 . 1/9/2013
Who's Chelsea? X
ShadowfaxRunner chapter 5 . 1/9/2013
OMG! Now I'm freaking out...wait, who's Chelsea?
BrightGrey chapter 5 . 1/9/2013
Wait- who's Chelsea?
firstadream100 chapter 5 . 1/9/2013
Who's Chlesea?
torontogirl12 chapter 5 . 1/9/2013
This is so not fair leaving it here. Really looking forward to the next update.
Miss Suave chapter 5 . 1/9/2013
:O oh damn. It just got real... and Sarah is such a mature 5 year old. Bless your heart baby girl. Ray, Im going to shoot you. K? Ok. Update soon :)
conservativegirl chapter 5 . 1/9/2013
WHAT?! Major cliffy! And after last night, I'm fragile, lol
Great chapter, poor Ziva!
prince-bishop chapter 5 . 1/8/2013
ruddy hell did not expect Ray being there, come one Tony wake up and protect Ziva.
mon-petit-pois chapter 5 . 1/8/2013
Ahhh I thought you forgot about this! Yay! So glad it's back! I'm loving it and I look forward to more at the edge of the seat.
Oh and who the heck is chelsea?
oldmoviewatcher chapter 5 . 1/8/2013
Um, who's Chelsea? I just read all of these chapters and am sorely confused by this Chelsea character. Update soon?
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