|Reviews for Silence Them fixed|
| Feuerkindjana chapter 1 . 10/12/2014
| MajorBachman chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
Hannibal and Clarice getting together is a delicate process of which many writers think needs a decent amount of words and time to simmer. In other words: this one-shot is rather rushed.
And then there are just too many references to canon. And as Hannibal teaches us: too much is just too much, way too much makes it come back right again. Had you used way too many references it would have turned out a parody, but that would have been fine.
But mind you: I'm not saying you should stop writing! Please continue and try to use any comment you receive. We're not here to remain the same way day in, day out. Learning and growing is an ongoing process for all of us.