Reviews for True Nature |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really this story is just so very lovely. I love vamp stories with originality. There are just... SO many typical New Moon rewrites and Twilight parallel-like stories that a horrific boredom begins to set in when there is so much more to explore and create beyond those tropes. This is one of those. I was almost scared at first, because I have a Dr. Bella / Vamp capture plot partially worked up based upon a govt. funded venom-research lab. I thought this story might be too close to what I have planned, but I'm happy to see that no, it is quite different. Do you still see these reviews? Are you still around at all? I have a feeling that, based on your writing that I've sampled this far, I'll likely be reading all the others that you've posted as well. When it comes to good writing, the story is always secondary. Till the next! ~Jo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi there! So... I've been circling the drain lately... stick in an endless loop of boring-as-hell fic and desperate for something NEW (I've read most of all the usual suspects that made us all love this fandom so much). Imagine my surprise to discover you and this fic which has sucked me RIGHT IN. I'm quite nervous though as this seems like it may be incomplete? Crap. You did such a thorough reel job with the first chapter I just HAVE TO. Even if I'm left devastated at chapter 12. I think this is gonna hurt, but I'm happy to have found you and pleasantly surprised to see that you have a FB page and are also and original author. I also remember hearing all about Major Misconduct back in the day and don't know how you slipped past me way back when... seems we travelled the fandom in the same circles, yet never met. Ah that ole six degrees. Well, I'm off to fling myself headlong into chapter 2 and onto the heartbreak I fear at the end of this thing! Till the next, ~Jo |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is fabulous and so original! I love it so much. I hope you come back to finish it some day! |
![]() ![]() ![]() esme’s shirt around carlisle’s ankle just makes me laugj |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I DO hope your muse bites you with renewed story-telling venom! Loved this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Long live the king! Its been years since you've updated any of your stories, but im hoping if i leave a little review Edward might reveal his plans to you. I hope you are well and happy and that inspiration strikes you! Keep Writing, IvyMasonCullen |
![]() ![]() ![]() STUPID GIRL |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bella is an idiot. Has no idea what she’s gotten herself into. Dangerous game. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Short but sweet last chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha! I wanna know what they did with the sofa & balcony taking! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's not much of a plan... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, she didn't see that coming. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If she wakes turned by morning, she can run back and get him - or maybe he will be able to free himself. (Biting nails...) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm guessing she still plans to escape with him when he recovers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Crap. Nothing about her being his mate, so no incentive to stop. |