|Reviews for Green and Purple PostIt Notes|
| BlaqBeast chapter 1 . 1/16
Omg this is too cute!
| HanaSwords chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
well, as a zorobin hardcore shipper i really enjoy your story.. i see that you have a problem with grammar just like me.. we should improve that, but the point is the reader get your story.. i love this.. and i read the others too. but only zorobin one.. :p
looking forward for your next zorobin project. :D
| shiki-mugiwara-addic chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
It was so cute C:
This Zorobin FF was amazing! :D
| MiMeNyan chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
| Zbluez chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Really nice and sweet! I enjoyed reading it a lot.
That said, you have some trouble with grammar. Sometimes your sentences seem a bit awkward. For example:
"Nico Robin would knock the door of the Crow's Nest while Roronoa Zoro was lifting weights with his toes, and asked him" should be "ask him" (you said "would" at the beginning of the sentence)
"And every single time too, he would say his refusal politely, without looking at her, and he focused on the strength of his legs until he heard the door closed again" same. Should be "and focus." I also suggest changing "say his refusal politely" to simply "refuse politely" (what's wrong with using just one word?)
"she ought to have known well that Zoro isn't the kind who would spend his afternoons with rainbow cakes and whipped cream." I would rearrange it as "She should have known well that Zoro wasn't the type to spend his afternoons around rainbow cakes and whipped cream."
"He thought it would save her time from knocking and asking the same question again to which, he answered with the same thing as well." It's a bit awkward. Maybe "He thought it would save her the time of knocking and asking the same question again, which he would give the same answer to anyway."
"relieved to have finally able to train in peace," should be "relieved to finally be able to train in peace"
"it took him a moment to properly made out the message." should be "make out the message"
"one belong to her," should be "belonged"
Anyway, your story was great, short and sweet. Keep it up!
| UltimateC3 chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
That was lovely... Not really anything else to say...
| Pentastic chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
| InnerTurmoil chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
D'awww! I recently got into the Zoro x Robin fandom and I love this!
| Kaitaru Stark-Laufeyson chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
That, is SO cute. I reached the end of the fic, stared at the last post-it note that Zoro had left on the door, and proceeded to fangirl scream at the cuteness. WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME? HOW CAN I ME EVIL /AND/ CUTE SIMULTANEOUSLY! I'll have to work on it. ;D
But this was a seriously awesome one shot, and I'm so happy to have taken a chance to read it. :)
| William chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
Hey there Seis Fleur! In the past I have read some of your other fanfictions concerning Zoro/Robin. Heck I've even read this one before and I am re-reading it. I learned that you authors like getting reviews as it helps and so I am re-reading all the fanfictions that I have read on this site and giving them my reviews. Anyways, I really liked this one and all your other ones for that 100 theme challenge thing. I found this one cute and adorable using post-it notes to communicate between the two. I hope you dish out more from that 100 theme thing. Keep up the good work.
| Ano Crazy Adventurer chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
Mmmmmm... So cute
See ya later ;D!
| The.Only.Girl.To.Be.A.Lost.Boy chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Naww this is such a cute story i love it.
| Joermungandr chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Very sweet i gotta say, nice idea ;)
Also I like it from the stype of writing more than your other fanfiction. Im not sury why.
| yokoisacoolname chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
Aaaah this was so cute! I love it. :D
| Analatelle chapter 1 . 8/20/2012