Reviews for Green and Purple PostIt Notes
KuanYin24 chapter 1 . 1/22/2016
Soooo Cuuute! *-*
Sea Wan River chapter 1 . 9/9/2015
omg that was so simple and sweet
Kagamine Miharu chapter 1 . 7/23/2015
Ao Fenikkusu chapter 1 . 4/17/2015
Was hoping for more romance, nevertheless still great:)
Sketcher1994 chapter 1 . 3/11/2015
Aw! This is so cute! XD I love it! XD
yuuki24688 chapter 1 . 3/5/2015
Okay. This is was pretty cute xD
BlaqBeast chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
Omg this is too cute!
HanaSwords chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
well, as a zorobin hardcore shipper i really enjoy your story.. i see that you have a problem with grammar just like me.. we should improve that, but the point is the reader get your story.. i love this.. and i read the others too. but only zorobin one.. :p

looking forward for your next zorobin project. :D
yukionnaMonetxX chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
Awwwww q.q
It was so cute C:
This Zorobin FF was amazing! :D
MiMeNyan chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
Zbluez chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Really nice and sweet! I enjoyed reading it a lot.

That said, you have some trouble with grammar. Sometimes your sentences seem a bit awkward. For example:

"Nico Robin would knock the door of the Crow's Nest while Roronoa Zoro was lifting weights with his toes, and asked him" should be "ask him" (you said "would" at the beginning of the sentence)
"And every single time too, he would say his refusal politely, without looking at her, and he focused on the strength of his legs until he heard the door closed again" same. Should be "and focus." I also suggest changing "say his refusal politely" to simply "refuse politely" (what's wrong with using just one word?)
"she ought to have known well that Zoro isn't the kind who would spend his afternoons with rainbow cakes and whipped cream." I would rearrange it as "She should have known well that Zoro wasn't the type to spend his afternoons around rainbow cakes and whipped cream."
"He thought it would save her time from knocking and asking the same question again to which, he answered with the same thing as well." It's a bit awkward. Maybe "He thought it would save her the time of knocking and asking the same question again, which he would give the same answer to anyway."
"relieved to have finally able to train in peace," should be "relieved to finally be able to train in peace"
"it took him a moment to properly made out the message." should be "make out the message"
"one belong to her," should be "belonged"

Anyway, your story was great, short and sweet. Keep it up!
MasterCool chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
That was lovely... Not really anything else to say...

-Wonderful story!
Pentastic chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
Awe cute!
InnerTurmoil chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
D'awww! I recently got into the Zoro x Robin fandom and I love this!
AchievingKitKat chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
That, is SO cute. I reached the end of the fic, stared at the last post-it note that Zoro had left on the door, and proceeded to fangirl scream at the cuteness. WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME? HOW CAN I ME EVIL /AND/ CUTE SIMULTANEOUSLY! I'll have to work on it. ;D
But this was a seriously awesome one shot, and I'm so happy to have taken a chance to read it. :)
Kai XxxXxxX
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