Reviews for First and Second
vortexgirl chapter 1 . 3/25
This is beautiful. Very wonderful. :)
KieraPSI chapter 1 . 3/21
Marvelous. No "Marvel" pun intended.
Pipergirl17 chapter 1 . 3/9
Lovely story! I'm always amazed at how many different ways folks find of having Darcy and Loki fall in love-thanks so much for sharing :)
ElizabethPierce chapter 1 . 2/11
This was perfectly in character and so very sweet. Thanks for sharing this.
Fanfic Allergy chapter 1 . 1/26
Sweet little story. I really like the Shakespeare drawing parallels to what's going on with Loki. Thanks for sharing!
Embers in the flames chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
I was honestly not expecting to read this one-shot and be so touched by your insight in both the feelings of being put second as well as the sense of awe of finding someone to relate to. Thank you for writing this! You're an amazing writer!
Allycat2090 chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
Aw, how adorable! I really like the idea of first and second, and all you've said about Loki and Darcy being second to things is really true when you look at it. This is adorable and slightly humorous and obviously well thought out, so I must say, you've done an absolutely fantastic job with this. _
queenofthebrokenhearts chapter 1 . 11/23/2013
I love this!
FarGreenCountrySwiftSunrise chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
This is a truly beautiful piece. Thank you for writing this.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
loved it :)
Deep-Within-the-Labyrinth chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
awww really great story! loved it! love this pairing so much you totally did them justice!
reneemm chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
very much enjoyed this
Kristine chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
Absolutely lovely fic! Thanks ever for sharing :)
Belief Among Unrest chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Aha! I love it! I like that it wasn't all physical, like everyone wants to make everything. Good story, bro.
Poodle warriors chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Great story- so well done. I enjoyed every moment.
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