Reviews for New Beginning
WindWolf13 chapter 1 . 11/28/2014
I really loved this! But I did kind of wish that you didn't have everybody introducing themselves over and over. (man, I am such a hypocrite.) Aside from that, it was incredible! PLEASE continue this story!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
Uh. You do realize, that Ariel would maul Emily's shoulder?
If a Red-tailed hawk can break a Falconer's wrist without using a gauntlet, then what do you think a Snowy Owl, Nyctea Scandacia, could do to HER arm? The characters are slightly Mary-sue; the concept is good, overall.
I do like where this is going, and I hope to see more of it.
Giang Tien of WillowClan
Sil Vaturha 98 chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
I really like this, but I get confused because I've only read the first book. :(
ihavedifferentpersonalities chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
KEEP ON WRITING! KEEP ON WRITING! KEEP ON WRITING! KEEP ON WRITING! I love it
rainbow warrior chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
way awesome! XD Update soooooooooon!
starlight130 chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
omigosh! I luv it! U must have put a lot of thought into it. I'm thinking of making my own avalon fanfiction, any tips for a beginner? XDDDDDDDDD