|Reviews for Captives|
| Jamille Shane chapter 19 . 12/5/2013
Ok, I about started bawling at:
"With all that I've done wrong, I must have done something right to have a daughter as beautiful as you."
And ohhhh! Where's the story going next?! Do exciting!
| L'Kor chapter 19 . 11/27/2013
Come on! Update already, lady. I have to find out whether I'm still drunk! *hic*
| Tribal Graces chapter 19 . 10/31/2013
I was so happy to see an update! And Ba'el is finally married. :-) But, wow, the Romulans were sharing the planet with two alien species and they never even knew? Here I was thinking the story would be wrapped up with Ba'el's wedding, but you've gone and thrown in another twist. It will be interesting to see what comes next.
| 0afan0 chapter 19 . 10/23/2013
I enjoyed the wedding. But, I really like where you are taking the story now. Sand dwellers... Hmm... I'm interested in hearing about the water dwellers as well!
| AndromedaAI chapter 19 . 10/17/2013
| Njmrtl chapter 19 . 10/17/2013
So wonderful to read a new chapter.
Poor Dhaval...Klingon vomit, Klingon blood wine hangover...
I loved every word :)
| BewilderedFemale chapter 19 . 10/17/2013
This is so cool! And then when they arrive in the land of waters, they find a mer-ferengi swimming about and flashing a toothy grin :-) but just when they think that all is well, a gigantic octo-pardek appears with a trident in his hands roaring "FOOLS! I SHALL EAT YOU ALL!"
| Just a Crazy-Man chapter 19 . 10/17/2013
Nicely done. :)
| Pardek chapter 19 . 10/17/2013
A wedding feast? Well! Why Didn't you say so? *places napkin around his neck and picks up a plate*
| thyme2read chapter 19 . 10/17/2013
Yaaay! An update! The wedding was completely Klingon, and the surprise inhabitants were a most unexpected twist. I'm so glad this story isn't over! The last line was particularly funny. XD
| Ork chapter 19 . 10/17/2013
Looks like meat's back on the menu, boys!
| Jamille Shane chapter 18 . 5/14/2013
He's back! And they love each other! Ahhh! I could cry... okay, I did cry.
"NOW, can I marry our daughter, Tokath?" LOL! He's ready already! Good to know the wedding is coming up. Can't wait to read all about it.
| BewilderedFemale chapter 18 . 4/30/2013
Awww.. so H'Dean and Evian are gonna get married and have lots of babies named after spring water.. or wait a minute.. maybe they're too old, they can always adopt..
| Wildblume chapter 18 . 4/16/2013
What a wonderful story! I really adored the first part about Anne falling in love with Dhaval...and then the second part with the ants was really scary and adventurous. Ba'el and Toq, H'dean and Eviess , they are all very funny and cute!
Sorry that I didn't review every chapter, I copied and pasted the whole story to my kindle and read it on the train.
| thyme2read chapter 18 . 4/9/2013
Haahahahaha! Great chapter. : ) I especially liked this part:
"It's about time to got here," she said haughtily. "But being the pig that you are, I take it you enjoyed your wallow in the mud?" XD Good one.
Poor Toq, now Tokath's going to be his father in law.