Reviews for the wedding
Guest chapter 4 . 5/14
isn't that percsy Jackson (I cant spell percy)
ellispuscas chapter 4 . 5/15/2014
NO. i refuse! thats not ok. you cant do this! you dont mix two stories. And jupiter is a roman God not greek. so it cant be in camp half-blood.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/31/2014
Write more please
Guest chapter 4 . 3/3/2013
ummm... camp half-blood seriously? but its still pretty good though
Foreveryoung284 chapter 3 . 1/2/2013
longer chapters what do you need help with
Chris Popp chapter 2 . 9/2/2012
"Of curse I will Zach, I love you." curse should be course, other than that it was awsome please cotinue it.
Beautiful-Not-Hot chapter 3 . 8/30/2012
Oh Crap. Bad people r coming! Great chapter! Cannot wait for more!
Loza101 chapter 2 . 8/18/2012
These chapters are good but not long enough, 300 odd words a chapter? no fun or good, and annoying. Great story but please just make the chapters longer
Beautiful-Not-Hot chapter 2 . 8/4/2012
Aw! Oh no!
Jayla chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
That was good but I hate cliff hangers
:)
KingJupiter chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
Grammer for the win! Team Grammer! "Just sayin', it's fine by me if you never leave. And we could live like this forever. It's fine by me..." I did nothing! I LOVE Andy Grammer! Good story by the way! update soon!
miss.goode chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
OHMYGAAAWWWD! amazing!:) please please please continue writing and update soon!
Beautiful-Not-Hot chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
This is really good(e)! he He...
I-Am-Nerd97 chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Ahhhhh. Sorry it to so long to review, I got caught up with school. This is so good, and I especially love the quotes at the beginning of the chapter. It was so sweet.
Keep going. I want to know how he proposed and all that fluffy stuff.
How long is this going to be? One shot? Two shot? A full blown story?
What ever you do will be amazing so keep writing.
Update soon k.
LYKY-United We Spy chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
It's cute. If you don't update soon I'll... throw a temper tantrum
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