Reviews for Immediate Action
Spark Erica Rose chapter 7 . 12/4/2013
This is really good and I know you haven't updated this in awhile but please do. Maybe Iris will get controled by argost and only the other kur a.k.a zak can snap her out of it. PLEASE DO MORE! PLEASE!
Niaelo chapter 7 . 3/27/2013
I love this story so much v Please update!
Cutie Kyuubi chapter 7 . 9/21/2012
Wait, what? I haven't watched the last episode yet! Man... Also, this is a bit late but, in chapter 4 when she's like, "tis confusion!" Did you get that from impractical jokers? Just wanna know.
Tornpeltoflife chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
u started at meh fav episode!
u may av changed but into a better 1 iz luv it!
and before u say anyhting no im not a fangirl
ANIMAL - HUNTER chapter 5 . 7/28/2012
I cant wait to read the next chapter!
Felis Malus chapter 4 . 7/27/2012
This story is pretty good and all, I but feel you should cut a little more out of your chapters. A lot of things drag on and it makes it boring to read. Perhaps if you made tinier descriptions after each sentence of speech, things might pick up faster and get to the action sooner. That way, people would be able to tell what's going instead of going through random conversing to see what's happenning in the actual plot :)
Breath of Stars chapter 3 . 7/25/2012
First review! :D

But anyway, this story is good and everything is in character so far. Don't make Iris to powerful. Then she'll be a mary sure. Take a litmus test just in case.

Update soon!