|Reviews for The Storm|
| AngelicSerenade chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
By the sound of this it sounds like MK9 IF KL didnt get killed back in part 11...
Either way this is one story i didnt expect to have Angst in it lol
| peper1705 chapter 12 . 9/17/2012
You shouldn't be doubtful with your amazing work! I have a feeling I know where this is going c:
Anyway you should of seen the way I squealed like the little fanning fan girl I am when I saw that you updated this amazing and not to rushed story. (that's one thing I hate, when the romance is all rushed, I'm like "really…? What to go making people seem like they just stood up and went to make out with the frist person they see. Did that make since? Doubt it…)
Anyway update soon please! I want to squeal some more by such greatness!
| peper1705 chapter 9 . 8/22/2012
Oh my goodness man.
I wish your magic was contagious so I could write such greatness as you. I literally squealed with joy seeing that you updated such an amazing story and you sure did deliver your magical powers through your words. I can not wait to squeal out loud with glee when another chapter comes along when ever you managed the time for such beauty.
| peper1705 chapter 8 . 8/17/2012
Such a great chapter was worth the wait! I can not wait for more and I hate how you left it there. (what I new by that is that i obviously want to ind out whats gonna happen as SOO as can be. I hoped this isn't offensive in anyway.) I usually done mind a wait but god dang it I want more!
| Nerdette92 chapter 7 . 8/9/2012
Bahahaha updated yay, I keep missing them (stupid work) :/. Great chapter as usual, can't wait for the next one :)
| Scytherageroses chapter 7 . 8/8/2012
If you get rid of this story, I'm hunting you down and forcing you to put it back up :p
Honestly. I love this. Pretty sure this is the only Kang/Lao story here, hopefully more will come.
Btw, you ever considering a Kenshi/Ermac? I've got one on my mind, but with my track record...never mind _
Can't wait to see more, so happy they've reunited!
| MellowMinty chapter 6 . 8/7/2012
I love your writing, it's so... descriptive and emotional. I also really like this story, and this is an uncommon pairing for me to even consider reading, but I'm glad I did. This is excellent.
My only suggestion is to make sure you proofread your writing, there are a couple of minor spelling/grammatical errors.
This is just really great, though.
| peper1705 chapter 6 . 8/7/2012
I almost never ready any story with Angst. It makes me to sad and I always skip over them. But when I found this one, I am so glad that I decided to go give an angst story a shot. This story is amazing and in craving for more!
| sickoftakenpennames chapter 5 . 8/5/2012
I like what I'm reading so far; you do a good job of highlighting Kung Lao and Liu Kang's relationship and how they are (...were) like brothers to each other. The only thing I found fault with was when you said "I am unaware Master Peace watches me race deeper into the fields." Unless the story is in retrospect, first person should normally be limited only to what the narrator IS aware of. :)
But that's just a little thing; I'd like to see where this goes.
| Sub-Pion chapter 5 . 8/1/2012
Oh wow.. I actually cried right before Kung ran down the hill to the end of this chapter I think / i was on the verge of tears from the start though lol.
Please update ASAP!
| BestBudman chapter 5 . 8/1/2012
Oh, Please please please please please keep on writing to this totally awesome story! Its too good to not get finished!
| That girl readin chapter 2 . 8/1/2012
Omg, the first Chapter almost had me in tears, and I dont cry easily! Good job and please update soon.
| Nerdette92 chapter 5 . 7/31/2012
Omg I haven't checked for a bit and I missed chapter 4, so here is a review for both!:).
I swear this story will have me in tears by the end of it! It's an awesome plot line and your writing is awesome. You convey emotion really well, and it makes for a sad yet awesome story. Please update soon :)
| Nerdette92 chapter 3 . 7/25/2012
Another tear jerker . It's really well written. Poor poor Kung Lao . Please keep updating . This story is great.
| Nerdette92 chapter 2 . 7/24/2012
Omg, I nearly cried . You have done well to make this story emotional. It's well written, poor angsty lil' Kung Lao.
Awesome chatepter :). Update soon:)