Reviews for Dusk Is A Derivative Of Dawn
Alibi Nonsense chapter 3 . 3/11/2015
I feel so sorry for Willy Wonka. He has my condolences. Adeline is probably a girl who terrorises most of her obsessions, I think. Elvynne, I think, has it worse. She's the one who has to stop Adeline. XD
TheDeductionist chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
Holy shit! This is brilliant! Oh, it took four times of me slamming my laptop shut due to the awkward hilarity, and bursting into giggles every second word, but I finished the first chapter and I love it! oh, god, I don't remember the last time I laughed so much :D
Guest chapter 3 . 12/12/2012
The story is really fantastic. Please write a new chapter soon!
Guest chapter 3 . 11/11/2012
Oh god, I lost it when Adeline put the blush on Elvynne's cheeks. "There were two pink dots on my cheeks. How odd."
Love this fic so far! I don't usually review but I will today. Pleasse update.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/10/2012
I really like this story. Main character is really great. Please update soon!
thesirentrick chapter 3 . 9/16/2012
I love this story positively! It is awesome so far
radio-ga-ga chapter 2 . 8/15/2012
This is really good. I really hope you continue this story, because it's original compared to most stories on here. Update soon, por favor! :)
Willy Wonka Fan chapter 2 . 8/5/2012
Love it! I was laughing practically the entire first chapter... Elvynne's sister is such a stalker! ;)
Update soon!
meridyan chapter 2 . 8/3/2012
Very funny, and one of the best wonka fanfics on here. Usually, all these stories have the main girl describing herself as beautiful, Its refreshing to read a story told in a more modest fashion. For some reason it reminds me of Marceline and Bubblegum Princess, my apologies if you take offence to that!