Reviews for The California Nemesis Conundrum
Whitelion69 chapter 23 . 6/1
This was a very good story.
loveRnB chapter 23 . 9/12/2013
I hoping that you would have add other chapter with Marry in it?
Mei2 chapter 23 . 8/18/2013
A terrific triple crossover! Love the little nods to Qweb's "Trouble Magnetized or Danny Does Disney".
Mei2 chapter 22 . 8/18/2013
Great teamwork all around!
Guest chapter 23 . 8/15/2013
lol that was great why do I get a feeling that DR Cooper will win this game?
Qweb chapter 23 . 8/15/2013
Why would Sam want to be Wolverine when he could be an awesome Nick Fury? But if They have to be Xmen, then he should be Colossus. Steve's a better Wolverine.
Fun story.
MarveyTibbsMcGarrettWilliams chapter 23 . 8/15/2013
Steve has the facial hair to be wolverine end of story
Guest chapter 22 . 8/15/2013
first part of the story your say

Chin kicked in the back door and Kensi followed him into the house.

then in the second part of the you

Almost at the same moment, as Chin and Kensi, Callen and Sam burst through the front door. There was a screaming then a shattering of glass and then the sound of gun shots as everyone in the house hit the deck - or took cover.

Kensi and Chin can't come through the front and back at the same time.

three part

"Except we took down your crew here, then van yard is under out control
should that say our?

I am just loving this story you know this right add soon.
Qweb chapter 22 . 8/14/2013
Windex even cleans up bad guys.
It must have been tense if the Big Bang Theory guys were silent.
Love Danny carrying the bottle like a second gun.
And I love that Holick thinks he has the upper hand but our heroes know all.
loveRnB chapter 22 . 8/14/2013
I love chapter it got everything :) great chapter
Mei2 chapter 21 . 8/12/2013
Yay, new update! Mean cliffie! Can't wait for more!
Qweb chapter 21 . 8/12/2013
The van is moving? Lovers or prisoners?

"Kono pulled a recording device off her, but nothing else." Deeks answered. "And the dog is clean - though he bites." - loved that

Hetty may be a legend but only in certain circles.

Good stuff as always. Thanks for the update..
loveRnB chapter 21 . 8/12/2013
should that be move in :) great chapter I like to know how it goes down and what Hetty find out
Mei2 chapter 20 . 7/30/2013
I like how you dealt with the loose ends of Chin's storyline. Also, go Raj!
Mei2 chapter 19 . 7/30/2013
Nice suspense...
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