|Reviews for Heart of the Arisen|
| nahum4u2 chapter 4 . 10/1/2014
Well, it was better than the chapter thats for sure, I was kinda hoping he'd slam her though...
but like I said just make the love between them no one else...
| nahum4u2 chapter 3 . 10/1/2014
rating... going down... cant keep up... Where's the romance between the two?
| nahum4u2 chapter 2 . 10/1/2014
So... where is the magic between pawn and Arisen? By any chance could you take off the name gabriel? I am trying to put myself in the position of your hero by becoming namesless thus, allowing anyone to be put in that position.
| nahum4u2 chapter 1 . 10/1/2014
Nice story, but as guy I am trying to put myself in the mans place. So keep it between the man and woman (equal) and I'll definitely keep reading. Good story, I await the continuation in anticipation...
| XoX Cherry Blossom Girl XoX chapter 7 . 7/3/2013
I totally love this story! I read all the chapters in one go... its addicting! I absolutely ADORE Gabe and your Arisen's relationship! If someone asked me to describe this story for them I'd say it is a boat load of cute, cute, and more cute! Please update! If not, I'll end up pulling my hair out!
| Obsessive Consumptive Reader chapter 7 . 12/30/2012
You possess much epic with this fic. Great job with this and I really REALLY like it.
| Obsessive Consumptive Reader chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
| Serel chapter 2 . 12/17/2012
You deserve more than a mere 8 reviews. I present to you YOUR 9TH REVIEW.
Your story is FANTASTIC.
Your writing skills are FLAWLESS.
You've done an excellent job. Seriously pat yourself on the back. The characters you've written are amazing. Not even I, who's itching to create a story about my own pawn and arisen could accomplish what you've accomplished. And that is create meaningful interesting characters with meaningful interesting stuff happening to them in a meaningful interesting way. I could never do that- a lot of people can't do that.
MY HAT IS OFF TO YOU.
| Nixe XTC chapter 7 . 8/22/2012
I really enjoyed this chapter !
I remember that some days ago we were joking about Ser Maximilian obsession with the Wyrm hunt and having Mercedes as perfect match for him. You did it awesomely putting this two together! He really needs it :D .
You and Gabe encounters, are breath taking. I can perfectly feel the passion of the moments running through my veins. You and Gabe are pure perfection!
Keep it up, sweety!
| InfamousMissFitz chapter 5 . 8/12/2012
Heey! Thanks so much for your mention! I can't be bothered to login, I'm in an internet cafe but I literally swooned at the thought if your Arisen, Gabe and a grffin being a badass dragon-killing team. Loved this chapter! xx
| Nixe XTC chapter 5 . 8/11/2012
aah, Chapter 5 . Impressive !
I love the fact that your team now has a new member! what a majestic beautiful creature!
It warms my heart thinking of those big brown eyes staring at you so innocent, asking for shelter.
Lovely, indeed !
| InfamousMissFitz chapter 4 . 8/10/2012
I think this is my favorite chapter so far!I love the way you did the whole reading each other's thoughts thing. That was really well done! Keep it up xx
| Nixe XTC chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
The Story is lovely!
The moments between Gabe and you are so sweet.
Adamar hah xD , neeh, that armor doesn't stinks that bad when he happens to feel that there's no danger stalking around the party.
| InfamousMissFitz chapter 3 . 7/26/2012
Me again! I love the storyline so far!. You've developed it really well! I can't wait to see what happens to the relationship between your Arisen and Gabe, and if it will ever be something more! Keep it up! x
| banxi chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
This was amazing! Has me hooked just from the first paragraph. ;; Your writing style is wonderful - I eagerly await the next installment c: