|Reviews for Ache|
| Mizra chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Aw, gosh, angst even in Narnia. Love it, though!
| MCH chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Nice chapter based on what Miraz said "We telmarines have nothing that we've never taken".
It was time for a King of Narnia to change and Caspian's musing and wishes was a sign of the change needed. He was just not the King for the Telmarines but also the King for Narnians. He had to build a bridge between the two communities and that means he couldn't always follow his heart. Anyway that what the story said to me.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
i really liked this story, excellent job. i had never thought about the whole "ordering her to stay" angle and it was a very interesting idea. you wrote caspian's character very well and it was just good!