|Reviews for Earl Grey and Apple Pie|
| Mashkai30 chapter 10 . 3/2
I have enjoyed this very much. I hope you find time to finish it someday as I would love to read the ending:)
| Kai19 chapter 1 . 2/26
I'm really hoping there will be more soon! it's been about 8 months, after all.. maybe with the new Captain America movie coming out, you'll be inspired? I'd like to see Harry's reaction to Captain America being his new.. um... boyfriend? Sounds a little immature, but they're not technically lovers yet... hm... anyway, I can't wait to see his reaction, not to mention if he'll admit to being a wizard yet, or wait a little longer... though the book Bruce has might reveal more than Harry intended... since it IS a magical subject... hm...
| Nikokami chapter 10 . 2/25
Please tell me you got the use for the term 'asexual' wrong on purpose. Due to Harry saying he doesn't know all the 'terms' though you'd think with his being an owner of a bookshop and thus supposedly well-read, he'd be quite clear in understanding that asexual is a very basic term for people who have no sexual urges or attractions to anyone or anything. You learn this in high school!
The terms I believe you to be looking for are either pansexual or demisexual. Please research these properly, all you have to do is type it in a bar on google!
Now, I do believe your basic idea and outline for your story is going in a good direction however you have next to no character development, a highly unrealistic development of a relationship between two characters that does not fit with the characters you are trying to build them into, and a lack of proper timeline and thus story progression by trying to progress this story too fast.
Also, your transition between thought and speech is not often clear enough and can be quite jarring. Perhaps take the time to put thought in italics, a different sentence or tell the thoughts in third person. Speaking of third person you also have a tendency to accidentally switch between third and first person, particularly in the sentences with thought speech in them.
And please be mature and not take this as a personal attack, this is a critique. As in it is supposed to point out the deficiencies so you can improve. I'm certainly not trying to put you down. I wouldn't have bothered critiquing if I didn't think your story can go from decent to excellent with some editing.
| PiptheSnake chapter 10 . 2/6
Hehe, this should be fun :) more please?
| blackbloodywolf chapter 10 . 1/15
This is amazing, please continue
| w- easy enough chapter 10 . 1/7
Lol, Harry is cute.
| Anything-with-Harry chapter 10 . 1/2
I love this. It's creative, well written and your characterisation is inspired. Please update when you can.
| Shadow Eclipse chapter 10 . 1/2
| Alice chapter 10 . 11/11/2013
Awesome! I can't wait to find out more about Harry's past (the part we don't know of).
| The World in Black and White chapter 10 . 10/28/2013
I love this story! Please do update soon :)
| Fox Loves Shinigami chapter 10 . 10/23/2013
This is so sweet I'm surprised that I don't have a cavity. I can't wait to read more though, update soon _ Ja.
| Ryane-Foxx chapter 10 . 10/20/2013
Totally loving this :) the idea is cute and inventive; new. I just wonder now if he'll end up learning about Harry's real past. Also, does he end up clearing his name with S.H.E.I.L.D and do him and Steve stay together. All around, other than a bit of drama; will there be a happy ending? :) I love Harry's demeanor in her btw, as well as the little I saw of Bruce. Can't wait for more!
| Agony's-Child chapter 10 . 10/16/2013
Please keep writing! This story rules! I love this pairing and the way you had them meet is so beautiful
| ripper34 chapter 10 . 10/15/2013
| KDTBpantherwulf chapter 10 . 10/13/2013
Nice! I'm a sucker for Harry/Steve fics, and this one's fabulous! Can't wait for the next update.