Reviews for Don't run
arya304 chapter 1 . 10/5
you need a beta, good story but so many unneeded words.
want more chapter 1 . 6/21
another chapter
Jordy chapter 1 . 4/18
Please please please update I really really love it so far
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27
U r gonna make another chapter right? Please tell me you're gonna make another chapter :)
foxface333ChocolateLabrador chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
Awww cute never read this genre but love this fic, more?
Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
? more
Lady Gaidin chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
Hot. A few grammar errors, but not too many to make it unreadable. Good job.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
nice. I like your Derek/Stiles stories.
i-got-one-and-you-dont chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
you should have wrote more it would have made a great story
Sassysavanna190 chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Emrys90 chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
Yummy I love it
Monki-Neko chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
I like your idea but you may want to develop the plot more by slowing the pacd just a lottle bit and revising your format. I feel that it could have been a lot better if the chase scene and the sex was elaborated on a bit more. Maybe add a hint of mpreg to give it that final touch?
Nodokalein chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Not bad, not bad :D
Some grammar mistakes, but the story is pretty good. (:
Serenity-Marr chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Hotttt ;)
No pen names left chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Okay, you need to check your grammar. It's not like I am the best with grammar but you had enough errors that it distracted from what was otherwiswe a really GOOD story.
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