|Reviews for Second Chances|
| New Izard chapter 4 . 11/12
New to fan fiction . Love your story and I'm hooked already !
Wow can't wait to read about Harry and Snape !
| BooNaughts chapter 51 . 9/5
I have really enjoyed this story so far, but I would say that it reads like Harry is much much younger, I do think it would read better with a younger harry
| Bewitchedgal chapter 19 . 8/7
For the most part you are just writing a book that has already written. I can no longer continue reading this story-I want things new and fresh-things that JKR herself never even thought off.
| PlatoOfAncientRome34 chapter 7 . 6/30
This story is so good so far!.
| PlatoOfAncientRome34 chapter 1 . 6/30
When I read the part where Dumbledor told Snape about him taking Harry I was like "OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooo shit son you just got PPPWWWWWWWNNNEEEDDD..." XD
Great story so far!.
| Hufflecarrie chapter 45 . 5/1
My friend just told me about your story .
It's soooo good .So excited to find it .
It's my favorite story so far!
I love how Harry and Snape are together
| pinkprincess jin chapter 30 . 4/29
snape said in a serious voice
a sirius voice
| Guest chapter 41 . 4/22
I love that part
| Guest chapter 59 . 4/18
This story...oh my gosh I loved it. Please, please PLEASE finish the sequel quickly!
| Guest chapter 36 . 4/12
I love this story
| Special Fangirl chapter 60 . 4/11
That was absolutely beautiful. I enjoyed every second of that story, and believe me, I would definitely pay to read it. I wasn't bored at any point, and yet it was slow enough to not even realise all the progress in their relationship. A few points though:
I thought the usage of the word 'bum' was a little weird. I would have preferred 'arse' (despite it being obscenity) or maybe just bottom.
I thought you used the phrase "Harry dared to ask" far too frequently.
I love the sequel to this fanfiction as well as the extension though I haven't reviewed them (yet)
Once again, thank you for posting something so wonderful.
You write some oneshots by request, don't you?
I know you've written many fics about Harry in trouble with Snape (and I intend to re-read and review all of them), but could you please do one more?
Set when Harry is 16, perhaps? Maybe you could write one in which Harry is caught long after curfew (possibly in the middle of the night) spending time with Ginny (set in the second chances world of course)
New beginnings was also very well written and I'll review after I read parts 2 and 3 (sorry this is turning into a review of multiple fanfictions)
I hope to write as wellas you someday!
And though it might be evident by now, you have a fan :)
This is quite possibly the longest review I've posted.
PS: could you do that oneshot, pretty pretty please?
| Just a fan chapter 34 . 4/9
You have these character down pat. I can feel and picture these characters . Please keep this world alive .it has become a part of me . So glad I discovered your story .cant wait to read your other stories !
| lilikaco chapter 7 . 4/3
Wow that owl scenario was really eye opening for me
| HeiressZs chapter 19 . 3/26
I just stumbled across your story .I am new to fan fiction.
Best creative story of Harry and Snape . I love your snape is being changed by Harry and vice versa . This is so awesome to read thus every night . I hope this continues and you never tire of your creation . Thanks again
| Guest chapter 17 . 3/26
Just thinking ahead
Can't wait for Harry to call him Dad
As if we would doubt your creativeness