Reviews for The King's Queen
Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2016
You wrote epilogue in the prologue
Guest chapter 4 . 3/31/2015
Where is the rest...update?
rinxxxav chapter 4 . 9/22/2013
Thanks for updating! I cannot wait for the next chapter! :D
val1794 chapter 3 . 1/30/2013
Actualiza pronto esta interesante la historiaa..ยก no dejes de esribir
colacatinthehat chapter 3 . 11/21/2012
Enjoying this a lot! 8D Update soon!
Menaru chapter 3 . 9/2/2012
I'm excited to see how this story will continue! : D
cloverbaker chapter 3 . 8/16/2012
okay, I think your plot is getting intense, I'm waiting for the next chapter (and the 'M' part actually, such guilty pleasure to me :P)
rinxxxav chapter 3 . 8/3/2012
I'm sorry I did not review the past two chapters. I got very into the story and I just couldn't stop reading!
I love your story please update soon :)
Ink Tsubasa chapter 3 . 7/31/2012
Oh my goodness, please update! :O How could you leave us with such a cliffhanger? You demon! Just kidding, you're awesome! So is this story. Like I said in my last review (I think), you're writing is style is just so fantastic. I love it a lot, and I hope you can update again. Also, no spelling or grammar mistakes, good job! :) I love this story already and can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck, keep it up!

Ink Tsubasa chapter 2 . 7/31/2012
This is very well written. The plot is so intriguing and the I enjoy the story line is just cool so far. I enjoy the way you place everything into the writing and keep the process smooth. It's very good basically! :D You're right on with FMA's basic info, so you're fine. I bet I'll like the next chapter too! ;)

Blesense chapter 2 . 7/29/2012
Interesting concept and a very promising story as I see. I'm looking forward to your next update. :D
Rew chapter 2 . 7/26/2012
Cool stuff, very interesting. Update soon :)
Lothmel chapter 2 . 7/26/2012
If Muastang is a General, he jump excatly four ranks, you can see here - wiki/Military_Ranks
So Riza can be Colonel (personaly I like how it sound).
To the story, hmm... I see what you try doing, it is interesting but it will have effect when you finish, when readers will can see whole, but still it is interesting. Not many people, here on , just experiment with composition (I am not sure if I use correct word, I mean structury your story).
The paced is ok, I don't know what you want from. We have few killed women and predator. This chapter could be a little longer but it's not necessary.
Riku Nanase chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
please update soon! and was the red eyes man Kimbly by any chance?
Ink Tsubasa chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
A very intriguing start, I liked it. I wonder how Riza got in that position, and I hope you'll update to let us know! Anyway, this was very well written also and it seemed to flow very smoothly, despite the hectic events. I like it and can't wait for chapter two! :)

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