|Reviews for The Grand Collision|
| partlysunny chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
OH MY GOD THAT WAS INCREDIBLE. THANK YOU FOR RUINING MY LIFE. THAT WAS THE BEST THING EVER.
| cuteypuffgirl chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
I think you just stabbed me through the heart and ripped out everything I had inside.
Beautifully-written and beautifully-executed and OH GOD. IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL. I am literally cried at the end. The emotions are so perfectly portrayed, and the writing is so meticulously crafted, and the characters... I seriously don't have enough of my mind left to articulate the awesomeness of this. So instead, let me just say THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND AMAZING THAT I CAN'T EVEN. Oh, curse you and your adept ability to rip out readers' hearts. As if we didn't get enough from the show itself T_T
Overall, what else can I say? So heart-wrenching, it's sad. Loved it!
| NerdsAreCool chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
This-'He wants to shout that he's been sleeping on the couch with Nelson because the bed isn't the same; that he still doesn't know how to work a washing machine and it's starting to negatively affect his attire; that Nelson whines at the bedroom door at three in the morning and lies down on the floor and waits for her; that West Side Story was on TV the other night and she loves West Side Story, so she should've just come over; that he's been thriving on the fridge full of food she left him but he could use some more milk so could she stop and get some on her way back from class? He hopes she had a good day, maybe she can help him out on his paper, not a chance, he'll vacuum before she gets there, he loves her, she loves him too—'
WHY WHY WHY WHY. IT MAKES ME BAWL BECAUSE OF THE ACCURACY. THIS WAS PERFECT AND I WILL BELIEVE NOTHING ELSE GOODBYE.
| ScarlettFiona chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
Oh my god. I'm sitting her CRYING! You hit me right in the feels, and hard. Holy cow, this was so i amazing..
| JesusFreak77 chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
RIGHT IN THE FEELS. You cruel genius of amazingness.
| dreamarcher chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
You're amazing. Everything about this one hurt so much but it was so good. All my feeeeelllssss are spazzing and I feel like crying... It's so beautiful, your story and the show and everything it's so... so perfect... but painful...
Anyways, it was another masterpiece.
| kinaabi chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
i don't think i have any adequate words for this. it's heartbreaking. it made me sob the first few times, and yet again i'm being reduced to tears. shit. it's so, so. gah.
| fantasy shadow chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
Whoa, this is so good. I feel like drowning myself in Wall-Art feels right now but oh well, it's worth it to read such gem. Please write more shorts like this, or variations of this, I LOVE this, and I sincerely hope they do something similar in the actual show ( Like a face down between the two, that would be so heart wrenching!)
| Nell Fratelli chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Hey, this sounds like a real fight scene! I know these are the hardest to pen, so kudos.
And please, please don't stop writing! As this summer hiatus drags on, it's becoming harder and harder not to log onto this site and surf for hours for post-Depths stories that DON'T want to make me drop a Thesaurus and a collection of literature on the world's doorstep just so they can know what the English language is supposed to look and sound like. Keep scratching away!
| annicaspoon chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Okay, so I re-read this - which was actually the worst thing I could have possibly done, because just like the first time, I am reduced to a sobbing mess (and I don't mean that as just an expression - I was actually crying while reading this - MY CHEEKS ARE WET). I don't know where you get this idea that you're not good at inducing emotion in your readers, because my god, you just cut open my chest, pulled out my heart, twisted it, stomped on it and put it back in upside down and back-to-front.
You can just FEEL everything Wally feels. You can feel his anger and his hurt, and just how how it is for him right now, but you can feel underneath that all he wants is to have her back. He misses her, and he just wants her to come home and (fuck, I'm crying again, Brella what the fuck?)
Just- oh god ;A;
| ShipperBody chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
So sad and so touching. Me? I'm crying like an idiot.
I want so much to see an episode about how Wally is missing Artemis and I want to see their dog awoke! lol And yes, I love your fics. No doubt about it.
Thanks for the great chapter.
| My Own Mayday Parade chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Dammit...I'm depressed now. How Wally is feeling by the absence of Artemis' presence is how I feel about the show right now. And that upper cut to the jaw is what I wanna do to Greg and the crew. Thanks for the wonderful story.
| ember53608 chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Oh my god, this was absolutely stunning! I mean, the simplistic yet extravagant way in which you portrayed all of Wally's feelings was just - too beautiful to handle. And I love how you ended it with this blunt abruptness, because in a piece like this, that was absolutely fitting and necessary.
All I have to say is two things: a) this is by far your best and most emotionally moving spitfire piece yet for me; b) I was actually reminded of a song while reading this. In fact, the very song was something which had inspired me to want to write a much needed spitfire fic. Only, I still haven't gotten to it...
You should listen to it, though, because after hearing it a few dozen times, I seriously think that it's Wally and Artemis's song. Like, for real; every single word fits the situation they're in now. It's scary yet very pleasing... ;)
Ah, the song. "What If This Storm Ends" by Snow Patrol. It's absolutely amazing and totally fits the spitfire pairing and your fic.
Anyway, thanks for the stupendous read - I think I'll go dream spitfire dreams now. ;)
| randommonkeyz998 chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
8( poor wally!
Love it! :)
| Opaul chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
I love the tone. Very ominous and emotionaly. I'm a sucker for good final lines "Sunrise comes in through the curtains and the door to the bedroom stays closed." I love this one. Light greets the earth but Wally does not run to meet it; his light is no longer with him.