Reviews for New Metal Fight Story
Sil3nt 4sh chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
(Clap) (Clap) this is awesome, man
Sil3nt 4sh chapter 8 . 11/12/2012
I can't PM you until November 13, sorry because I'm a new member
Sil3nt 4sh chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
This story is awesome
Sil3nt 4sh chapter 14 . 11/11/2012
Yea, I am The one you sent you the review on Coby Potter
DazzlerAngel chapter 14 . 11/9/2012
When is hat Nakamaru's truth gonna be out?
Coby Potter chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
Can I have an OC in your story

My OC name - Coby Potter
Age- 13
Gender- Male
Race- Human
Beyblade- Savior Leonidas 105HF
Bey Type- Attack

Special Move-
Draco Meteor Attack- it is like Pegasus Starblast Attack but stronger
Cosmic Force- is when Leonidas crash down on the opponent bey from up high in the galaxy like Galaxy Nova
Dragon Rush- is when Leonidas circle around the stadium or ground at super speed create a giant tornado and then crash into it, it is almost like Pegasis Storm Bringer
Soar- is a command to make Leonidas go faster

Appearance- He have spikey dark brown hair along with blue eyes . He have a tanner skin, a slightly deeper voice and a mature look. His outfit contain a medium shoes, a silver and black over jacket with crimson and white trimming, a black vest with a dragon on it, a crimson pant with a yellow string launcher attached to his black belt worn around his waist.

Personality- He is a calm, nice and sometime hyper and will do anything to Battle with his bey and protect his friends especially Hikaru as well as the world from danger. He is alway pump, ready to battle, never giving up and battle until the end " This is what make up his blader spirit and his power to surpass human limit and expectation

Love Intrest- Hikaru Hasama

He is almost as strong as Nakumaru

Background- He is a blader who search all across Japan to battle against strong opponent like Nakumaru, Gingka, Benkei, and Hikaru who he and she fell in love with. He have the strength to surpass anybody if he concentrate
Winrychan7 chapter 10 . 8/25/2012
Great battle! Nakamaru had a good opponent. But I don't stop believe in him. I liked when he finished battle. He used to it only one attack.
,,''Yeah that really worth getting two buns with a giant chunk of meat between it.'' Nakamaru said sarcastically as he continued to eat his fires."
I love this quotation! xD As for burger-texts Nakamaru is best.
Winrychan7 chapter 9 . 8/17/2012
Nakamaru is winner! I wonder if Ginga ever beat Nakamaru... Frankly I doubt it. Because if Nakamaru won with him using only half of his power is unlikely Ginga ever catch up to him.
Winrychan7 chapter 8 . 8/11/2012
-''I got it...the triple beef burger'', Ginga said happily as held the paper bag with a big burger on it while standing next to a kid holding a ice cream in his right hand
''Ginga! Please don't make a big scene?'', Nakamaru begged as he got up off his stomach and walked towards him with his hand of his face.-
I love this part. xD And... Nakamaru and Ginga Fight! Profitable to wait until the 8th chapter. This fight was amazing! I wonder who will win... Maybe will be a draw? But... It's probably unlikely.
Winrychan7 chapter 6 . 7/31/2012
Uau! Incredible battle! I wonder if there is something what Nakamaru does not know... And who is this boy with Daidoji?
Winrychan7 chapter 5 . 7/29/2012
It was hard to get used to this chapter without a fight. But the battle in the next promises to be very interesting.
Winrychan7 chapter 4 . 7/27/2012
Yeah! Nakamaru is winner!
I wanted to this chapter, because I wanted to see you take pattern in manga Metal Fight Beyblade or anime. In anime Madoka don't appear.
Waiting for next chapter!
Winrychan7 chapter 3 . 7/26/2012
I really like. ;) I read from the beginning. I can not wait 4 chapter! The Moment of Truth-Madoka appears or not. Please, update soon.