Reviews for Fifty Shades Unwritten
bookworm1404 chapter 14 . 2/17
I know she has lived through a trauma...with the fucker Hyde...but saying that losing Little Blip to miscarriage was a blessing in disguise so that she could travel and see the world is just being bitch a selfish bitch...if I was Christian I would tell her to go fuck herself...divorce her and find a woman who would appreciate him...plenty of women out there who would walk over glass to make a home with him.
bookworm1404 chapter 8 . 2/17
I sometimes think that Grace and Carrick including fucking Mia Grey...have absolutely NO boundaries in the nosey intrusiveness in other people's business...Grace means well...I never trusted Carrick in the books, the movies or other fanfiction...The Aspen mini vacation for Ana and Christian would have been a positive one for Ana and Christian where they could have caught up ..don some kinky fuckery...but then the Grace and Carrick show up...they had this planned but the timing of just off...Yes Christian is grieving also over the loss of the little Blip...often times after a miscarriage the husband's grief is forgotton in the storm of the physical emotional storm that the wife and mother is suffering...it being physical as well as emotional with the hormonal fluxuations going on and her body being mixed up as the physical loss of the baby and hormone change/loss. But this could also bring the couple together emotionally if they learn to lean on one another and comfort each other...maybe the in laws should step back and allow the couple to grieve together...It was very touching the you as an author wrote of Christian crying to his mother...it is too bad Ana and Christian couldn't have been the ones crying together...I think instead of Carrick chastising Ana about her evesdropping of Grace and Christian he should have kept his nose out of it...I never liked Carrick very much...especially about the fucking pre nup shit...and in the book Fifty Shades Darker and Freed...the way Carrick chastised Christian about having an affair with a married woman (Elena) during his birthday party. And telling Christian that he doubted him being husband material. ...and kept pushing and pushing Christian to make Ana sign a pre nup to protect his fortune...YEAH CARRICK IS FUCKING PRICK LAWYER! FIRST AND FORMOST...I also think that Carrick gave up on Christian as a little toddler and growing up...chosing to ignore Christian instead of helping Christian learn how to be close to the family ...he instead chose to interact with the more demonstrative Elliot ...Throughout the books at the end of Epilogue of Fifty Shades Freed...the part of Fifty's first Christmas I cried my eyes out for Christian as the 4year old little boy who couldn't bear to be touched...thoughtout the books through Christian's inner thoughts and nightmares and interactions with his new family as well as remembering his time with Elena in the beginning and how she drip fed him grooming him and then pounced on the vulnerable hormone raging adolescent boy. In another fanfiction story THE LUCKY ONES with Flynn's help he comes to terms with the damage Elena did to him...He finally comfronts Elena about her abuse of him and the Traumatic Bonding ( The Traumatic Bonding with Elena is a very good discription of Christian and Elena's relatonship...anyway...Christian confronting Elena...saying to her...I was a horning hormonal adolescent that would have fucked a snake if someone would have help its head for me...Oh wait I did fuck a snake!...I loved that part of the story in that fanfiction...
Patricia Self chapter 1 . 6/24/2024
When did she become friends with Elena?
MillyD chapter 28 . 1/29/2024
I know exactly how she feels...
justallen406 chapter 180 . 9/13/2023
I love this story, I don't how anyone could say this was boring! I can't believe it took me so long to find it. man, what Christian just did, unbelievable she needs to make him see how wrong he was on how he handled things.
vickiel2r chapter 76 . 9/9/2023
Make Christmas greeting cards made from pictures of their tree.
vickiel2r chapter 75 . 9/8/2023
Nice gesture for Christian to invite Luke Sawyer for dinner with them, a show how appreciative of him for taking care of Ana for almost beyond his capacity.
vickiel2r chapter 74 . 9/8/2023
Ana couldn’t help the argument the minute she feels better and ready to overdo Christian again. She almost died and Sawyer as well. The situation was actually more grave that she thinks.
vickiel2r chapter 73 . 9/8/2023
Ana made the decision to leave as the weather got worse and unforeseen accidents do happen sometimes. Christian will have to reign her down a bit. She is going too fast as her confidence had built up in her business.
vickiel2r chapter 72 . 9/8/2023
Not a good decision but couldn’t tell what is on the road when it is snowing. Now what happens next.
vickiel2r chapter 71 . 9/8/2023
That was a quick business dealing buying a company pending the final signing. Ana is a straight shooter.
vickiel2r chapter 70 . 9/8/2023
A surprise de stressed massage courtesy of Christian Grey to his overworked wife at her office.
vickiel2r chapter 69 . 9/8/2023
Their minds are going a mile a minute, too busy but making time
to see each other during work hours. What has Christian in mind now.
vickiel2r chapter 68 . 9/8/2023
Ana is busy with all her new transactions plus her other responsibilities. She is going to outdone Christian before she knows it.
vickiel2r chapter 66 . 9/2/2023
Christian can turnover a building floor for Ana’s temporary use in a day. Everthing moves like a clockwork and Ana is getting to be like him too. They are going to be dubbed as the power couple in no time.
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