|Reviews for The Fright of Day|
| Nidhoegg chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
Okay, let's move on to this one. I have to say this was one of my favourite episodes, though I always felt that they solved the issue far too quickly - but then it likely wouldn't have fit into one episode.
Therefore, I really enjoyed how you dealt with it. Melissa's worry is quite tangible and as always the character's lines are spot-on. All I have to complain about is that it's only a one-shot - I want MOAR! XD
| ASuDC chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
What a clever and moving story…I really don’t know where you get your ideas for such outstanding plots…it’s terrific. ;-)
Poor Melissa, now the girl will get daily “night terrors” on her own, worrying if Alan will survive the nights. :-((( So it is high time for Denny to step in to release Melissa from her sorrows. ;-) Preferable with a rope around him and Alan – God I LOVE this scene. ROFL
The story itself is very compassionate and very well written – I really can “watch” it in my inner cinema – I enjoyed every sentence of it. ;-)
Alans and Melissas characters are spot – on, their word exchange, their gestures, everything – together with the lively description you accomplished again a superb BL story. I didn’t even missed Denny in this storyline - which is saying something. ROFL
Thank you so much for sharing…well done…you’re priceless!
| Peninkwell chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Well done! Once more the characters ring so true!
| alynwa chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
This was wonderful! I had a feeling that was the situation you were alluding to and Melissa you were writing about and was glad to see I was right. Her fear and later, her resolve were very well done and came across clearly as did Alan's quiet desparation.
Thanks for sharing!