Reviews for The Treasure Of Love
Katie chapter 19 . 8/2
Sorry it’s been 5 years now and just wondering, are you going to finish the story?
Katie chapter 19 . 1/15/2017
As soon as this story ends, can you make another story? I was thinking after graduation Jim and Jessica along with their friends get married and start having kids. When the kids are older they will go on their journey. Hope you love that idea.
SwimmingSoul chapter 19 . 12/29/2013
Please update I want to know what happens
EventHorizon6 chapter 17 . 2/5/2013
Aw poor Lewis, perhaps Jess will finally realize he's on their side, and I am so curious as to how they're going to get out of this one alive now :o
EventHorizon6 chapter 15 . 12/8/2012
Well it's about time I got back to reading and reviewing this story! Sheesh, sorry about that ; I love the ending to this chapter, I'm glad to hear Leland left Jim to protect him, that's so sweet and I really hope they'll stay safe. But the last line was so intense! Yikes! And now Hayes has the map! Aye, this is bad news indeed! On to the next chapter :D Great work again!
EventHorizon6 chapter 14 . 9/15/2012
AHHH! This chapter was sooo intense! It appears Leland still cares a lot about Jim then! I bet he made a deal so that Jim wouldn't get hurt, but never bargain with pirates. Those guys are nasty liars. And poor Jim! Poor Jess! Lewis...! Ah! Go save them you dummy! It must've hurt really bad for Jim to get whipped like that and for Jess' mother to get cut, I feel so bad for Jess I don't even know what I'd do in that situation! :o
EventHorizon6 chapter 13 . 9/15/2012
Okay I am so sorry it has taken me this long to review one chapter! Ahh! I'm a horrible fan D: But anyway, whoa! This chapter was so intense! Poor Jess, I feel so bad for her when it comes to her dad. It seems like such a touchy subject. So her dad did care about her? I'm assuming he did but it also seems he left her like Jim's dad left him. Stupid pirates! They twist everything! I'm glad she got reunited with her mother as well, even though it is in a prison cell :) and oh noes! Jim! RAWR! I have to go read the next chapter now!
EventHorizon6 chapter 12 . 8/5/2012
Whoa! Yeah Jim's comment was way out of line and no! The pirates captured Jess! By the way, that's an awesome ship name: The Siren Screams, and Lewis...uh-oh he sure is going to have to make it up to her, it's going to be really hard to regain Jess' trust if he actually turns out to be the good guy. Oh I hope her mother is okay :o Again, great work! :D Very suspensful
EventHorizon6 chapter 11 . 8/5/2012
OH MY GOD! Leland's in with the pirates!? I did NOT see that coming! Holy crap! :o Ahhhhhh! Oh man, this is going to tear Jim up, and speaking of Jim where the heck is that kid? He sure knows how to hide when he wants to hehe :) Oh Lewis, you need to quit the pirates and save your new friends, and Jess...oh no she's going to get into trouble...oh man another awesome chapter :D
EventHorizon6 chapter 10 . 8/5/2012
Uh-oh, what happened to Jim? And Leland, where the heck did he even come from!? He needs to leave, he's hurting Jim! D: But I am eager to see his side of the story :) Oh Lewis finally asked Selaura out! Yay! But Jess seems to still have her doubts, oh man is he the bad guy? Yeah I think he is but he'll turn out to be the good guy for Selaura :D Great work again!
EventHorizon6 chapter 9 . 8/5/2012
Whoa! I did not see that coming! Jim's dad comes back? Oh my goodness! :o Poor Jim, I feel so bad for him and I laughed so hard when Jess was grumbling about normal couples XD Nice work! Sorry I haven't been reviewing, I have two library books and two books for school I need to finish *guilty face* so much reading! But awesome work and it seems Benjamin and Lewis are starting a band, awesome! :)
EventHorizon6 chapter 8 . 7/31/2012
I sense that there is going to be some drama between Jim and Jess :o and Lewis too since he's worried Jess doesn't like him. Hehe Jim certainly can see right through Jess. Something's up with her nightmares uh-oh! Great work again :D
EventHorizon6 chapter 7 . 7/31/2012
Oh no more nightmares! Yikes! I wonder why she keeps having them and what they're about, hopefully not her dad again that would be so sad :( It's so cute how Jim comforts her though and how her friends are there to help :)
EventHorizon6 chapter 6 . 7/31/2012
Ugh sorry it's taking me so long to read this amazing story! :D Awwwww soooo cute that Jim remembered their aniversary! And Lewis is being such a sweetheart to Selaura! Adorableness! I loved the dance and song they sang, awesome work! I just hope Lewis doesn't betray her. Augh, suspense! hehe :D
EventHorizon6 chapter 5 . 7/28/2012
I knew Lewis was the bad guy! Ha! Oh no! Jess' mom got kidnapped? Yikes! And...oh no they're going to go after Jim next I bet! Oh man, this is so scary! AHHH! But cute how it will be Jim and Jess' first date type thing :D
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