Reviews for Deconstruction
Guest chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Did you add sections to this today ? The status says updated but I am not sure what is updated.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Oh! I wish and wish.. please write some more!
forlovealone chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
what beautiful writing...and those words...I cannot begin to tell you how beautiful and how much they effect me.

please write more.
Frankie chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
This is beautifully written.
luluathome chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
This is amazing. So satisfying and insightful.

Loved "you gave up her love when you held it ransom to your pride and were fool enough to think you had won in the exchange." So perfectly captures what he did.

And this "I want you to...her face bloodless: capitulation and despair. He tastes victory.." Spot on description and compare that to your passages describing Richard's awareness that Matthew is his rival and he can't begin to compete. He is playing a losing game.

Then "is this is Crawley?Are the gloves off at last?" I would have loved that in canon.

Lavinia forcing herself to take the whole of the betrayal in. You'd want to know wouldn't you? How heartbreaking when she realizes her compromise of his honor and duty instead of his love. Mary will always have it.

And so much more. Will there be more?

Outstanding. I so enjoyed this.
sasita747 chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
What an amazingly well crafted story. You really went inside the characters' heads and wrote something that felt very real. Thank you!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
This is utterly amazing. sorry, don't have anything useful to say, I'm totally in awe!
kmh11 chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
This was just magnificent. I wish I could say more, but I am just in awe.
Chickwriter chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
"You gave up her love when you held it ransom to your pride, and were fool enough to think that you had won by the exchange."

Really brilliant choice of words.. so precisely what he did... really enjoyed this fic.. well done!
crankygrrl 2.0 chapter 1 . 7/25/2012

Such wonderful writing deserves a more fulsome response but I am rather gobsmacked by this piece. Very well done.
Pemonynen chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
This is amazing, and I'm sorry that I can't add anything else to that, but it has bowled me over and I am...without words for how brilliant it is. :D
GenuineRisk chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Wow, what beautiful vignettes. So well done. I will check out those other fics you mentioned!
Keriannerae chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
What a simply stunning story. I am in awe of how you have delved into the heads and hearts of each of the four players. I especially loved how you set the scene for Lavinia's heartbreaking statement regarding Matthew. Well done!
Anonymous Again chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
This is beautiful prose, quite simply. Is it a one-shot or will there be a second chapter?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
I wish I had something intelligent to say about this, but all I can say is that I loved it (even if it was indeed a little overwrought).
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