|Reviews for the space between seconds|
| Elen-Di chapter 1 . 4/26
I like them and I like quiet companionable understanding. You do these well
| TheUntameableShrew chapter 1 . 1/24
i love your writing style. its so slice of life-ish. So real, bittersweet. far too short but i love this
| TexasDreamer01 chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
Simple, and sweet in the way that knowing two people fit together well is.
| cyathula chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
That was excellent; Zuko's reply was perfect in his understanding.
| AshAnime chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
Brilliant. There isn't any other word describe this but that...
| caspasta chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
| Olive Tree Hugger chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
So much angst and feels :
| janedoe401 chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
The space between seconds...
I like that title. And I like how Zuko said something else entirely when Katara said she could feel everyone's blood.
| Kimberly T chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
Very well done.
| marblesharp chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
This is so good! I'm glad I found this. It could very well be canon. :)
Missing period at 'He was sitting by the glowing fire pit, looking up A spark danced between his fingers', but that was the only error I found. Everything else was just perfect.
| glitterings chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
omg sara. :o
so i loved this very very very much and when i found out that you shipped zuko/katara i totally flipped out in the best way possible.
amazing as always! c:
| 4getmeknots chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Cool! I really like your exploration into Katara's bloodbending & how it's something that can slowly eat away like you (I believe Bryke mentioned how it opens a person to darkness or something). But of course I loved it even more when Zuko is the only one she can sort of open up to about this. It's like he accepts her, darkness & all. 3
| The Scarlett Ribbon chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
I am speechless right now.
Just. I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHERE TO START.
IS THERE MORE?
I WANT THERE TO BE MORE.
I kind of feel like this could fit in somewhere a few years before DWR. And how she feels about bloodbending.
JUST. PERFECT PERFECT PERFECT. And non-awkward Zuko.
They are such beautifully paralleled characters nghhhhh. GODAMNIT BRYKE.
Also you know that couch comes with an abundance of love. And possibly pizza.
And Dim Sum.
| ilyenamylove chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
I am so glad that you talked about alike they are. It seems like a lot of people focus only on their differences. Love.
| invisibly inked chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Zuko and Katara bonding over lost mothers and not sleeping, I like it. And the way your so descriptive yet clear with your words, especially about Katara's guilt over bloodbending, is beautiful. As always, you have a way with words.
Also, that song-I know that song, I looove that song