|Reviews for One More Chance|
| Lastminutegenius chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
I may have more than just simply "read" the story! *goofy smile
Its such a wonderful mix of raw passion and tender emotions, just the right balance, and I love how both the characters shine through with such honesty...and there were some really original analogies that I simply had to grin and marvel at- U r ingenious!
| DarXe chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
| Restless Goddess chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
*sigh* That was just...*sigh* Absolutely beautiful. I love how you can make it so tender and beautiful and loving and raw without even needing to go into any explicit detail. This story makes my heart ache for them even as I smile for them; you're so good at evoking emotions, and it makes your writing painfully wonderful to read. Absolutely beautiful.
| ElenaRavenWolf chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Very well written and I think u can change the rating to T
| Xenite chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
I say this chapter is spot-on! That simply had to be what's happened in the B&B while Artie was meeting Mrs F and Kosan at the Warehouse!