Reviews for Eyes On The Future
Hawtsee chapter 6 . 7/30/2012
Yay, they're making progress. No back steps at all this time.
RoryFaller chapter 5 . 7/29/2012
This is very good. I loved the final scene with the kiss when she's falling asleep. Can't wait for her to confide in him.

RF
Hawtsee chapter 5 . 7/28/2012
Hopefully they won't take another 10 steps backwards after this. Maybe this time they'll actually start moving forward.
Hawtsee chapter 4 . 7/27/2012
Poor Gale. His man brain can't make sense of anything. lol.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/27/2012
I want more!
StoryLover chapter 3 . 7/26/2012
I love it honestly! I like what you did with the story and if you keep it up I can see you story being more in depth. I feel that the characters are developing well and I'm just dying for more!
Hawtsee chapter 3 . 7/27/2012
Great part. Hmm. I wonder why Gale's father never told him about their plans.
Hawtsee chapter 2 . 7/26/2012
This is really interesting so far. I don't think Hazelle expected that she'd cause Gale and Madge to kiss when she sent him to apologise. I wonder what she's think of that if she knew.
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