Reviews for Left, Right
SSRandomness chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
That was excellent! I love the style. What a wonderful metaphor, the hands separated by the body. It made my heart hurt, haha. Fantastic writing, it flows so nicely and everything fits together perfectly. Well done. :)

-Sephora
Lin chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Overall, I think it's very good. Very poetic, you have great command of language and prose. My only compliant is the Al/Riza pairing. No. Just No. That just comes off as creepy and is way OOC for her.
P.S chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Beautiful!
I love your interpretation of these two,
Keep up the GENIUS work!:)
Kitsune-Blue chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Once I got used to the left/right and figured it out I thought it was really great! Sad though!
FortReveuse20 chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
I love your analogies here. Stories with deeper meanings should get credit they deserve. I found maybe ONE error, so it's not a big deal. Don't worry about it. Other than that, I'd say a professional author could've possibly written this. C'est une belle histoire! (It's a beautiful story haha)