|Reviews for Some Cats Get Too Close to the Wire Chapter 1|
| Sue Pokorny chapter 6 . 10/30/2013
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| Sue Pokorny chapter 7 . 10/30/2013
I just recently found the DVD's of the Mod Squad! Haven't seen this show in decades! Loved it when it was on in syndication when I was younger. I hope you intend to finish this story - very intriguing set up! There's just not much for the show on .
| GoldAngel2 chapter 3 . 1/21/2013
Once again you created a very accurate and vivid picture. I could see everything in active detail as Pete gave his all, fighting with all his might but eventually overpowered by the fire of the gun he was forced to succumb. His situation looks bleak...for now...
BTW, Mod Squad is being shown on ...I live in MA...every day 10 AM.
Off to ch 4...
| GoldAngel2 chapter 2 . 1/10/2013
I like the building of the plot here...they follow up on anonymous tip, which yields nothing and nearly gets Pete bumped off after being abused by a surly thug of a boss but still are without hard evidence of the drug trafficking. And Pete's in the hospital after nearly freezing to death...good thing Linc's surveillance and deducing picked up the danger signals. Still why?
On to ch 3...
| GoldAngel2 chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
I need to put you on author alert...had I known about this story I would've immediately read and reviewed. As usual, your handle on 60's era imagery is impeccable, I could see the variety store (that's what they called them back then) clearly and then the way you've created the scene is spot on...and your dialogue is natural with great flow.
A small store...a beauty shop...and a warehouse...all very interesting fronts for a cover operation
I wonder what's about to happen to Pete...of to the next chapter...
| Maaliem chapter 5 . 10/30/2012
Really good story. I especially liked this: Green and black bulbous hues held him in a sticky knot of sleep. When he tried to rise to the surface, the colors swayed as if he were coursing through a nightmare. Sinking back and giving in, sleep shut off the light of his consciousness.
Thanks for sharing
| mcatB chapter 5 . 9/13/2012
Great to see an update! Looking forward to finding out what happened to Pete - or even if he remembers...
| Shirley chapter 4 . 9/12/2012
This is great - I have ALWAYS loved Mod Squad - hope you are going to write more!
| Teyerin chapter 4 . 8/9/2012
Wow! A lot happening here, with the sense of urgency very apparent.
| Teyerin chapter 3 . 8/9/2012
Fast pace here, with a nice reveal of Captain Greer. Tightly written and very easy to see.
| Teyerin chapter 2 . 8/9/2012
I like the banter between the guys. Favorite line was: "Your way out would've been too permanent, man."
| mcatB chapter 3 . 8/4/2012
Exciting! Very good descriptions here of the fight - fast and furious. Looking forward to more.
| Laurie Partridge chapter 2 . 8/3/2012
Great job! I am looking forward to the next installment to learn how the warehouse boss figured out Pete was an undercover cop!
| mcatB chapter 2 . 8/3/2012
Good start to the story. I hope there's more, with some more perilous times for Pete... Glad you figured out how to do the chapters - makes things easier to follow along.
| Laurie Partridge chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
The Mod Squad is still one of my most favorite TV shows of all time. I don't usually find many fanfictions based on the show, but I think yours has great potential! I am looking forward to reading your next installment.