|Reviews for You Become a Habit to Me|
| Sheytune chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
I love this. Especially:
"Bones, I love you, but would you please get the hell out of the Men's Room before someone else comes in here?"
Few ask. People all over the world have made assumptions about them since before they were a them, because when one hears hoofbeats one is taught to think horses (while Booth and Brennan have always been zebras).
They make no efforts to hide the truth when questioned directly. Neither do they make any effort to explain the truth.
(No, I'm not married. Yes, it's a wedding band)
| Frankie707 chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
This was lovely, it really was. I liked this version of events to come. I can totally see Brennan believing and behaving this way, and really Booth too. It so fits with where they are now and how they've gotten here.
| SammieAtHome chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Loved it. You are so right and this was so "Brennan"!
| bluexdaffodil chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
This story is wonderful! Brennan is sill same old Brennan but also changed Brennan :D She still doesn't believe in marriage but she can appreciate the gesture and how much it means to Booth. Perfect! But still, Christine took my heart here ;)
| SchwuppDiDupsi chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
really great. good work. i love you stories. awesome. thanks for sharing.
| JMHaughey chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Be still my heart! I adore this. . .
| ExcellentDriver chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Thank you very much. Now if any of this doesn't happen on the show for real, I'll be frustrated for life.
Really, you gave me completely surreal expectations for the show.
I want to watch this so badly!
I want to see Christine being adorable and talking and Brennan being an awesome mom and Booth being a sweet father.
So, Bones better go to at least a season 12.
Now really, this was incredible. You made me laugh and smile and these were my favorite parts:
*"Because you and daddy are stubborn sumbitches and you're not married."*
LMAO. Of course it had to be Max.
*"Don't be mad at Grandpa. I didn't mean to tell."
Brennan sighs. "I'm not mad."
"You're making your mad face."
"I do not have a 'mad' face."
"Daddy says you do."*
Hahaha. I can just see Booth ganging up with Christine to tease Brennan.
*"Are you asking me to marry you?"
"You're being incredibly childish."
"Bones, I love you, but would you please get the hell out of the Men's Room before someone else comes in here?"*
LOLOLOLOLOL That is so them and SO should happen on the show!
| JayBee188 chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Oh...my god. I loved this! Squeee! The only little part that was OOC was Brennan flipping Booth off. I can see her tightening her lips or maybe even biting her thumb (Shakespeare reference), but not that. Anyway, I am in love with little Christine. And she cares what Michael thinks...awwwwwwwwww.
| Biba79 chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Christine watches these events transpire from the corner near the tub and once it's clear that Brennan is not so much in control of the situation, she immediately breaks into a run to tell daddy.
lol I couldn't stop laughing at that. Of course she would be that cool and tell on Brennan. lol
"Because you and daddy are stubborn sumbitches and you're not married."
I can't believe she said that to Brennan. lol That little girl is so cool in my book, especially now. lol
The conversation Christine has with Brennan about the ring and marriage was adorable, all because Christine wanted her ring. I loved how that started, all she wanted was to be right and her teacher to be wrong. And I don't think she cares if they are married or not.
I loved the ending. I loved that for them, they are married, but not on paper, and it doesn't matter what people think and let everyone assume what they want. Her idea was brilliant, or should I say your idea was brilliant.
I was really surprised with a fic from you, and extremely happy. Thank you for another wonderful piece Ren. I loved this one just as much as the other ones.
| aguachica35 chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
I always love your stories and was a little concerned about your "brainless fluff" comment at the beginning...not brainless at all! Very clever and I am also on the fence with them being married, I think they probably will be in the end, but at this point I like your solution better. Maybe after this season we'll think differently.
| daisy07 chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
I loved this! I think this is a very credible version of their love and to have them married but not married is absolutely perfect for them. Loved how you seamlessly (and brilliantly) included and explained the opening scene from 'The End in the Beginning' too.
| Fluffybird chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Good story. It irks me too when the show writers make Brennan more awkward, dismissive and disrespectful; and Booth more of a buffoon, a bully and well...disrespectful. I think you are correct that they have been there done that and can't we just move on? A little bit?
Backing away from the RantRock now...just fictional characters in a story I am too attached to...no need for this blood pressure.
But yeah, enjoyed the facets of this story.
| Chicklit chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Love this to bits. It is just so perfectly them, I grinned like a loon the entire time I was reading it. Thanks!
| NatesMama chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Amen, my sister! I don't care if they ever get married, as long as they're happy as they are. And this was sweet, but honestly...not too sweet for me. Very them. I loved it.
Well done, my friend. :)
| eitoph chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
This is the first time I have had to review with this new fangled system, so woo, crazy review window.
Marriage is an issue that fandom kind of struggles over and yet here you are with such an interesting and very possible take on how it could all play out. Like I've said before - this is real in a way that so many other fluff fics aren't; it felt right for the characters and right for the story and I was really taken in by the whole concept. Your idea of saccharine fluff has so much to it - it makes me think and feel in all the best ways.
I really like the idea of Booth with a ring, I'm not sure why, but no matter the reason for it, it makes me giddy.
I just loved the bit from the closing section: "Few ask. People all over the world have made assumptions about them since before they were a them, because when one hears hoofbeats one is taught to think horses (while Booth and Brennan have always been zebras)." So very true for Booth and Brennan.
I love that there is fic happening for us right now. This was such a lovely piece to read and I hope to see more where it came from.