|Reviews for Let ME Comfort you|
| Princess Kanami chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
it was good
| nicole0 chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
I think Dei should had fought a little seeing as he was for/upset about Sasori. I like that he focused on the tone change but I think he should have freaked out more or something
The lemon was good even if it kind of creeped me out
I hope u write more of these two
| For23 chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
Awesome job, this was interesting. 1st POV sucks!
I think Dei should have fought, he was in love with Sasori, and He should have been freaked or something by seeing the sharingan. If he saw it...
The lemon was kind of... creepy. The whole 'stay in this position or I'll punish u' _
Love this pair, write more!
| Redskiez chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Hahaha! 'The Sharrigan let out a dark chuckle' xDDDDDDD I find this very funny! Don't change it!
Me no likey SasoDei D:
| likeaboss chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Please continue! It was pretty hot HYFR!
| DragonFire44 chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
I love this pairing! I'm glad u did them and that there was a lemon, it was rather well done. And I was glad u stayed in third POV, I can't stand 1st POV
Though I would think that Dei would fight it at least a little, since he was in love with Sasori I can't see him excepting so easily to have sex with Tobi. And be far more concerned at his change in attitude and voice. I did like that u had Dei focus on his change of voice
I was a little confused at points, Has Sasori been dead for three years? I was unsure... perhaps I simple read it wrong...
Also If Tobi took off his mask and Dei saw his face doesn't that mean he saw the sharingan? If so I really think there should have been a reaction. Dei hates Itachi, the sharingan... So I just feel he should have freaked at least a little if he saw it. Plus then add that Tobi is an Uchiha, all this time - he'd been lied to all this time... Could Dei really have sex after finding that out...?
Though Maybe he didn't see it...
This is ur story, u can do it however u want, I'm not trying to offend
I did like it, the lemon was different then past ones I've read. I was a little surprised that Dei was totally find with being called such names... made me a little annoyed at Madara for that...
Is this the end? I hope not, I want to keep reading! Please write more!