Reviews for sorries just wouldn't do it
weasleyjumper chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Very angsty, but very nice. I love it :)
mew-tsubaki chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
Nice job! :D

Thanks for the shout-out, but you really made this FV your own, hon. It's just... -w-

The formatting's brilliant. I've not read an FV so eyecatching yet easy-to-read. The story-line's nice, too, because Lilted was meant for angst! T-T

But there are some things in particular that I love. For one, there's the ambiguity about the "her" to whom Teddy fled. It could be Vic, for canon-worshippers...or it could be any next-gen girl. I'd pick either Roxanne or Dominique, personally. ;) But I also like how there's a "we" mentioned at the start...yet the ending has them separated, already pulling apart into "you" and "me." Very clever and very subtle, but also very strong. Not to mention that one doesn't often see Teddy being the screw-up and asking Lilu for forgiveness! 0.0! I also adore how "downcast" and "forgive" catch my eye, but "downcast" was tops. ;]

In, short:

Write. More. FVs. And. More. Lilted!


-mew! :3

P.S. - I just had to add - reading this on the computer was so much better! I didn't realize who you'd separated things's even more beautiful than I'd originally thought. So *bleep* amazing, accio. Truly. XD
Eula Banana chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
I feel lonely after reading it too. I feel you Teddy!
Lovely work, accio. :)
muggleonaholiday chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
That was great!
hofei1234 chapter 1 . 7/26/2012
Love it! It is really angsty.
Rhiose chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Coooooool :O
ShadowPrincess 2 chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
How to read... I feel like there is a hidden message.
But I don't know how to read that
chai-san chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
aww. that was sad. so, they had something before..?