Reviews for Wizard Hidden In The Leaf |
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![]() ![]() Since Hari has had the House Elves scouring the lands for anything of interest, did they find the Uzumaki Clan Mask Storage Temple mentioned in chapter 618, "The Ones Who Know Everything", and all surviving copies of Uzumaki Clan Scrolls? Will they have also aquired copies of Jutsu scrolls from the collections other Hidden Villages? (i.e. Futon Jutsu for Naruto and Asuma?) Will Hari supply Hiruzen Sarutobi with the Luck Potion, Felix Felicis, to give him an edge against Orochimaru? Will Hari help in the search for Tsunade? Will Hari aquire a Time Turner at some point? Will Hari show his Genin how to fly on a broom? Or a Flying Carpet? Will Haku be creating the Ninto (Nin-usagi, Ninja-Rabbits) summoning contract? Also, will there be a Ninja Mongoose summoning contract? (Given that Mongoose eat snakes). What will the Ninsen, (Nin-Gama, Ninja Toads), reaction be to Naruto having already signed a summoning contact with the Ninko (Nin-Tora, Ninja Tigers)? Will Hari either bring other magical creatures, (i.e. Unicorns), Dragons etc, to show his Genin, or will he take them to see these beasties in their natural habitats? Will Hari ever introduce Jiraiya, Hiruzen or Tsunade to Oak-matured Mead or Firewhiskey? What would Tsunade make of Firewhiskey and hangover remedies? What will Tsunade's reaction be to Hari, (Hari's skills as a healer etc)? Will Jiraiya ever get his hands on a dose of Polyjuice potion, a strand of Tsunade's hair and then lock himself in a room with full-length mirrors for a hour with a camara? How will Hari deal with the problems back in England? Will Hari ever be asigned to fill-in for the other jounin senshi while they have their hands full with missions, and do to/for them what he did for Naruto? (Improving their skills, (Hinata, Shikamaru, Chouji), breaking them of bad habits, (Sasuke, Sakura, Sai, Kiba, Ino, Neji), and helping them all around, (Shino, Tenten, Li). Will Hari ever reveal a potion that when mixed with a sample of blood/hair/DNA of someone, and then drunk by a woman who's not pregnant, make a woman pregnant with that person's child, via Immaculate Conception, (thereby easily reviving lost clans, i.e. the Uchiha, Yuki, (Haku's birth clan), Uzumaki, etc)? When Hari claimed the Elder Wand, did he also claim Riddle's wand of Yew wood and Phoenix tail feather, via Right of Conquest? Will Hari ever tell Jiraiya and Hiruzen of Horcruxs, Deathly Hallows and of the Philosopher's Stone? Will Hari ever create Magen Genjutsu based off of the works of Edgar Allan Poe, (i.e. The Raven, and The Tell-Tale Heart)? Or William Shakespeare's MacBeth, ("Out! Out, damned spot! Out, I say!") Will Hari ever make use of Basilisk Venom? That would really make Anko's day? How will Hari deal with Sauke's Cursed seal? Will he transfer it onto another host, (i.e. a Pig)? Will Hari's Ninja World Mauraders Map grow to include the rest of the Land of Fire, or even the other Nations? Will Hari ever cross paths with Uchiha Itachi and use the Conjunctivitis Curse against him? |
![]() ![]() It is good but, it needs more chapters in it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good crossover - I hope you come back to this - I would love to see where it goes :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() just Say in Potter in japanese is Togei-ka |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooohh i want more please |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm confused. Dog (who is Kakashi) saved Naruto from a mob before. But now, he blamed Naruto of Minato's death and didn't save him from the mob? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope you pick this back up and that you're doing ok! |
![]() ![]() Please sir/mam can i have some more i needs more |
![]() ![]() Fanfic is pretty decent, nothing masterful but pretty good. However, the one thing that pissed me is SO MUCH is when he said he would teach them magic. This pisses me off because they have their own energy and abilities and shit, so there's no fucking point in giving away what makes him unique to any of the assholes in Naruto. Secondly, the odds that ANYONE has magic in Naruto is retarded. Like there's no reason why they should have it |
![]() ![]() ![]() FUCK, I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH! I WISH YOU WERE STILL UPDATING! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great stoy just binge read it in three hours so by brains a bit tired now but great story |
![]() ![]() This bash fic is annoying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() J'ai bien aimée ton histoire, il y 'a tout, sentiments, enseignements, entraînements, missions, équipes ect ... Merci et bonne continuation. Amné |
![]() ![]() ![]() An amazing story here so far! I'll be watching for updates! |
![]() ![]() ![]() note down that the potters are one of the richest families in the wizard world and 30 gold are nothing to them |