|Reviews for Wizard Hidden In The Leaf|
| akinomatis chapter 21 . 6/28
Please update this story! Its fantastic!
| movielover8210 chapter 21 . 6/26
Great story, please Update pretty please with eye candy on top and an orgasm below
| lunaatje123 chapter 21 . 6/17
It's too bad this story appears to be on hiatus/abandoned, because the Chuunin Exams/ invasion was building up nicely and I would have liked to see how you'd continue it.
To be honest, in the first few chapters the pacing of the story, as well as the character and plot developments, were rather erratic and I was debating with myself whether I liked the direction your story was taking enough to continue reading it despite that. I'm glad I did, because you greatly improved those points in the later chapters. (It seemed a bit like you were 'struggling' with how to establish your version of the world and characters in the beginning, and that was the main cause for the writing being all over the place. At least, that's what it looked like to me)
Beside that there are some minor inconsistencies in the timeline between when Harry/Hari comes to Konoha and the time he becomes Naruto's sensei. For example, at one point just before a timeskip you mention that Naruto is 10, and then you mention it being 5 years later when Harry takes on Naruto's training, even though at that point Naruto should be 12ish. It's not too bad though, and easily ignored since the exact timing isn't that important most of the time.
One of the things I really liked in this story were your portrayals of the characters. They are really fun and interesting, and their dynamics and interactions were well done. Also, I don't think I have seen a maniacal/sadistic yet still good/kind Harry before, and it was a blast to read the interactions between him and your incarnations of the Naruto cast. Again, it's too bad this fic is unfinished, because I would have loved to see the plotline with Wizarding Britain's new dark lord unfold and blend with the ongoing Naruto events. Still, unfinished as it may be, thank you for the story!
| xXAliceBlackXx chapter 21 . 6/15
Best Harry Potter/naruto crossover ever
| ilanit.harary chapter 21 . 6/4
i love hari! bring those who are true to him to this world!
| Guest chapter 21 . 5/29
Please please please!, continue this amazing story. I'm eager to see how Haku's and Kenjis training us going. Also hopefully Kenji, and Sano can sign one if the other summon scrolls and have everyons summons plus Hakus special rabbits battle each other and together so during the upcoming invasion they would have the upper hand. Also maybe have Sano and Hari fight together to improve heir teamwork so during the fight they would be very effective and deadly. (:
| NatNatWriter chapter 13 . 5/28
Lol, I really love Harry's character in this. I hope you have Naruto and his team interact more with the rookie seven, though. It would be more interesting to read about their reactions.
| Kyubi9 chapter 21 . 5/27
HI YA! KYUBI9 here saying I love this story
and can't wait until you update, so I hope you update soon.
WELL THATS ALL SEE YA!
| Animeangellover2 chapter 21 . 5/26
Great story! I love the relationship of the Harry's family. Can't wait to see how Harry's traps go off during the invasion.
| Venipa chapter 3 . 5/13
Fucking awesome. I love it
| gandalf da black chapter 21 . 5/8
This is good. Keep it up.
| bloodyredfox chapter 21 . 5/6
A very interesting and well written read...please update though...and are you going to pair Hari? Slash hopefully~~
| AnimeFreak71777 chapter 21 . 4/24
Please update! :D
| tamahome8 chapter 21 . 4/20
! super! thanks for this amazing story! :) 3 3 3
| a ghost named yukimenoko chapter 1 . 4/19
hey! did you notice that ''mahora'' sounds like "majora", like majora's mask? i love it! nwn