Reviews for Volcano
Harathos chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
You may very well be the best author on this site. You're gonna write Pulitzer prize winning books someday. this short story brought tears to my eyes and that's something great authors do.
Leach101 chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
YES! Sophie is gonna die!-

I don't know if it is bad or not but i just hate sophie and how I wish That Josh had more POV's.
coolgle chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
This was really good, I like how you captured their emotions with the song. It was brilliant!
PatronusAvis164 chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
this is good, a fresh idea. But the lines of the songs seemed out of place. :)
thewriter2342 chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
Marethyu is Josh
Hedley Girl chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Your first sad/angsty story... and I hated it.

Not that it wasn't well done, it was amazing. I actually did listen to the song while reading the first time, and then without, and you're right, it does set the mood. So, in the sense that your writing was amazing and this story is beautiful, I loved it. Loved loved loved it.

I hated it because it was so sad. I had tears running down my face by the end.

So, I loved it, but I also can't say I loved it, 'cause it was sad.

Another masterpiece.