|Reviews for Love in Shades of Green and Gray|
| Jerel chapter 71 . 2/10/2014
Thank you SO MUCH for the ride! I've read this through (to this point) three or four times now.
Bringing in Tarzan as John Clayton threw me for a loop. The only version I'm deeply familiar with is the Disney movie and in that one Clayton is the villain. Loved all the Star Trek references! Looking forward to the epilogues!
Normally, I don't follow stories; I set the filter to "Complete". I stumbled accross this after reading "Raven's Wedding" and checking your link to see what else you had. I've read every story you've posted several times now. You, sir, are GOOD!
| TheForceIsStrongWithThisOne chapter 71 . 2/9/2014
Wow, Raven came across as pretty callous. The only reason she chose to not murder her unborn child was because she was afraid BB would dump her if she did. I guess it is all about her. Is it too late for BB to go find Mitzi?
Congrats, Gar, you bagged yourself a keeper! Oh, and she didn't tell you about how much she enjoyed it when Nightwing screwed her, did she? I didn't think so.
| KingOfShadowedOnes chapter 71 . 2/9/2014
Thanks for a wild and bumpy ride well worth the read, been here since the beginning and just wanted to say thank you know that it's over.
| GarLogan676 chapter 71 . 2/9/2014
I'm so sad it's over :( such a great story! Makes me feel like I need to get better every chapter I post. Thank you very much for such a journey!
| JasonVUK chapter 71 . 2/9/2014
WOW! Just wow! 8D Amazing Mark is born
_ I am like so happy for them all! I'm so excited!
But you have me worried with the title. "All good things" "must come to an end"
I feel scared about their future :C
| A very odd fellow chapter 71 . 2/9/2014
Despite being this fic's shortest chapter, I think this could very well be its best yet. I could easily see this as a one shot, and a damp fine one at that.
I hope to read your original work, if to support you than for no other reason. I'm somewhat hit or miss when it comes to darker themes.
| xpetunia chapter 71 . 2/9/2014
Really enjoyed this fanfic. I liked how all of the characters matured throughout the years, but of course, they have their little bit of immaturity kept inside. I also enjoyed the action scenes, most stories do not really have intense battles like you wrote so great job. Anyways, minor mistakes but I don't really think it's a huge problem. It was still well written so keep that up! Lack of sexual scenes but of course, I prefer not too much so it did not really bothered me. Although for the last chapter of this fanfic, I was a bit upset how you skipped time. Yes, the chapter is extremely extended but it felt like it went by too quickly, but overall this story is fantastic! Hopefully you will make more wonderful stories like this in the future. Keep up the great work! :)
| Blueeyez01 chapter 71 . 2/9/2014
Yea! So happy for the quick turnaround on the next chapter. I almost cried when they couldn't even adopt a baby, but then I saw that there was a whole lot of chapter left so I kept my fingers crossed they would have their own, and you didn't disappoint! Can't wait for the epilogue! I wish there was a "all-time favorite fanfic" button I could push :)
| necro-wulf chapter 71 . 2/9/2014
That was a bit fast but pretty well done.
I always subscribed to the theory that BB and Rae's prospective offspring would be, well freakish. Gar could probably get anything pregnant because his DNA is one-size-fits-all, and Rae is half hell god. They simultaneously shouldn't be able to reproduce at all and are most likely to have a healthy kid together. To say nothing of the inevitable superpowers the little monster (I kid, I kid) is going to have.
I even say one were due to being a hybrid Raven was sterile, except for BB's super-seed (which put alot of pressure on their relationship). But whatever, Shippers gonna ship.
I always found the idea of preggers Raven to be both hilarious and horrifying. She could level a building really easily on a hormone binge. The EOD suits were probably a good call.
I've got mixed feelings about the out-of-continuity cameos here. On the one hand, I accept the fact that few DC heroins ever got knocked up and delivered super-babies, due mostly to DC's abuse of comic time(which they invented), so Marvel and Mrs. Incredible make senses from a story telling perspective. But the purist in me feels that if this sort of crossover was going to happen it should have been indicated sooner (Tarzan gets a pass because anyone can use public domain for comics, which is why Marve and DC both have Frankenstein's Monster) and that including all that in the last chapter is kind of jarring.
All and all a great story though, and I look forward to anything else you may write in the future.
| HolyMaryMotherofGawd chapter 71 . 2/9/2014
*Applauds* Damn good job, sir. This was an incredible story you have written. Easily one of the top 5 on this site.
Also, I loved how you snuck The Incredibles in there. Well done.
| Jimmy1201 chapter 71 . 2/9/2014
A great ending to a truly epic tale. The EOD suits were a great idea. So was having her talk to other "super" moms.
Thanks for the amazing story.
| Dead Bones Sam chapter 71 . 2/9/2014
It was a good run my friend, and while I'm sad to see it finally come to an end I'm glad it was ended on a 'happy note'. May you have luck in your future story progresses.
| The-Best-Librarian chapter 71 . 2/9/2014
I haven't even rad the chapter. It's going to be awesome. I was minding my own bidness and was like "Oh, an email" This is the subject 'Chapter: Love in Shades of Green and Gray Ch71 by LamontCranston1066' and then i explode
| Guest chapter 61 . 2/9/2014
You've got one misconception here, immigration into the EU is still handled by the member states, not EU offices ...
| BlueLion chapter 47 . 2/8/2014
First Noel and O holy night - to of my favorite christmas songs - I think Raven's performance would be somewhat like Celtic Woman ...