|Reviews for Love in Shades of Green and Gray|
| notabotipromise chapter 38 . 7/25/2013
oh shit, Raven done goofed.
Strangely enough, I don't feel compelled to read the second lemon either, but for completely different reasons from the first. The build up was plenty, and a gentlemen doesn't screw and tell. Cutting from the bite to the aftermath was very well done, and keeps the story tasteful. If I want to read literary porn, even well written porn, I'll probably go elsewhere.
| notabotipromise chapter 32 . 7/25/2013
I hate cliffhangers as much as I hate zombies that don't have the decency to be slow and easily decapitated. but I'll give you a pass since you used my second favorite Firefly quote.
| notabotipromise chapter 31 . 7/25/2013
Stark Industries? Iron Man is Marvel character, not DC.
Also, fucking zombies :[
| notabotipromise chapter 30 . 7/25/2013
and Cyborg's man score just tied with Changeling's. He's pretty much the ultimate big brother in this chapter.
| notabotipromise chapter 28 . 7/25/2013
Changeling officially now has more man points than Chuck Norris and Burt Reynolds put together.
| notabotipromise chapter 27 . 7/25/2013
oddly, I don't really WANT to read the lemon. Raven was completely shut down emotionally and Aqualad is a complete tool in this story. None of the chemistry that makes a lemon enjoyable is there, and from Raven's point of view it would read more like a user's manual anyway. Since I already want Aqualad to go play with traffic, the lemon wouldn't serve any purpose for me.
| notabotipromise chapter 21 . 7/25/2013
I don't really know what you mean about wanting to throw rocks at the author with this chapter. Personally I kind of like the pacing you have going here. This story is about 2 people growing up. It's about character development, REAL character development, and you're doing it without contrived plot devices or unnecessary crises to do it. People don't grow up over night, and the same goes for falling in love. We as the readers KNOW the two are made for each other, but pushing the two characters together before they're ready makes the story feel forced and unfulfilling. You've managed to hit the sweet spot between pushing the plot along too fast and dragging it on forever.
On a side note, I kind of liked the author's notes you stuck in in the middle of the dance scene a few chapters earlier. Youngin's need to learn that it's much less painful to learn from somebody else's mistakes and hard won experience than to go learn it all the hard way.
| SheepShepherding chapter 47 . 7/24/2013
Hey, just want to let you know that I appreciate the bit you put in about Raven opting for Christianity. I don't know if you are a Christian yourself, but anyone putting it out there that God forgives all who ask is exciting to me.
Besides that: interesting story. I like the extra stuff you put in that molds the characters. Their backgrounds. And appreciative as well about making the 'mature' scenes not public.
| tatsumarusmith chapter 64 . 7/24/2013
Yeah, demons attacking a wedding. Seems like an average day in the life of a titan and i gotta say seeing garfield crushed was incredibly shocking to say the least.(When you respect, admire, and emulate a certain green hero long enough watching him get smooshed in the blink of an eye is distressing)
Im a pretty empathic person(A reason i really like raven in the comics and show) and to say i felt her fury and pain was pretty awesome.(Original definition, not the slang term its used for now) "Let hell hath no fury, over a womans scorn" is a quote that springs quickly to mind when i think of her and the pain of loss.
Overall, a pretty good chapter. I was on pins and needles as i read it wondering if an attack on their wedding day would be in the cards(considering the menagerie of super villains, demons, evil things etc etc youd sometimes think it would be inevitable) or not. Im always a glass half full kind of dude and part of me just wanted a "normal" wedding for them.(They deserve it i think.)
OH, and one last thing, i apologize for not reviewing your last chapter. I was too busy trying to catch up to this chapter to review it, but i guarantee you it was freaking awesome. Especially the private vows scene. It was so raven that i wasnt even attempting to make a reference to the show thats so raven.(I.E. not joking. :)
Keep up the good work and hopefully see you next chapter. :)
| Inuyashagirl312 chapter 63 . 7/24/2013
I'm glad that
| Inuyashagirl312 chapter 62 . 7/23/2013
Yo they had a blast. Man i to Vegas.
| Inuyashagirl312 chapter 61 . 7/23/2013
Yo the Titan women got messed up!
| Inuyashagirl312 chapter 60 . 7/23/2013
Girl if Trigon wanna come through he will. Have some shape shifting babies
| Inuyashagirl312 chapter 59 . 7/23/2013
Mannn i knew Star would do some mess like that. I would love to see her kick Blackstar's ass.
| Inuyashagirl312 chapter 57 . 7/23/2013
Lmao i'm loving the boy on boy. I want that power!