|Reviews for Love in Shades of Green and Gray|
| 00cLosetFreak00 chapter 57 . 4/13/2013
The boy knows his stuff for all who know the holy sacrament of engineers are masters of all technology!
| krostovikraven1 chapter 57 . 4/13/2013
I always wondered that little detail of Raven's hood. it defies phisics no matter how you see it.
And that is a very hard and extreme decision to make and i imagine even worse to order it. If they loose the war and her knorfka does kill the children then that would be it for their species.
Now, so its that armor like a robot? i wonder if its prepared with artillery. would it be able to create star bolts?
| BxbsnsjdjfkxncI chapter 57 . 4/13/2013
Lol there were so many great lines in this chapter! So many! Great chapter! And can you please fix raven's and changeling's relationship sometime soon! Please? Pretty please?! Anyway I can't wait for your next update!
| The Fat Lantern chapter 57 . 4/13/2013
I have enjoyed this little side story on the Starfire's Home Planet, your story continues to be top notch, but I do have a question, The Armorer, he reminds me of the Drood's Armorer from Simon Green's Secret Histories series, was he your inspiration or do you have no idea what I am talking about?
The Fat Lantern
| Randamwriter chapter 57 . 4/13/2013
One what the hell is Kori a literally and hour glass figure?
two yay more Changeling and Raven
Three By X'hal's Golden tits I beg of you please update quickly
| Omeganian chapter 57 . 4/13/2013
Ever read Starcrossed?
| Shadico chapter 57 . 4/13/2013
Oh Azar this chapter is AMAZING! Mecha-Starfire Cameo! My god! That was so out of left field. I was totally just expecting some random cool looking steampunk gundam *shrug*. The next chapter will be so epic! Can't wait for BB to emerge in the battlefield in that thing, jeez. I can just picture the sweatdrops on Rae and the rest of them now. Ahahaha
| IanZakk chapter 57 . 4/13/2013
And I just realized that I reviewed as a guest. In case you couldn't tell that was me ol' friend
| Guest chapter 57 . 4/13/2013
Very fine job. You weren't joking when you said there'd be some wtf moments. But you did what you wanted to do without getting so far out there as to pull the reader (that's me!) Out of the story. If I had one piece of constructive criticism it would be that this chapter was a little too central to beast boy (though I understand why) but that being said it kept me captivated to the last word. I really enjoy your writing. Keep 'em coming.
| JOHNXgambit chapter 57 . 4/13/2013
to answer your title YES IT CAN. once again awesome chapter bb's action near the end help lighten the mood for me
| Arashikage1988 chapter 57 . 4/12/2013
Its quality over quantity...up until the pregnancy he ripped every idea you had off...I digress your story still on par as the best. little confusing as to when confusing on when it began but still good chapter loved the whole bb obsession of raven details in it was cool I think he starting to crack being so close and yet so far away that she wont even talk to him...i am getying frustrated with all the bad things you writers are doing to this couple and taking forecer to fix its like you dont care what we think I know its not the case but can please just get to the happy already why is at ways negative people stop reading after awhile when its the same stuff over and over...you shook it up now fix it please and for the love of god and any smart do not make eaven pregnant with Nightwing baby I think you might literally make every fan you have like the force guy is
| Yodaheisnot chapter 57 . 4/12/2013
Great chapter wasn't sure when it started...still one of the best stories on this site wheres the bb/rae going to start its like your avoiding it because you either have something good planned or something terrible planned hopefully good because I dont think anyone could take something bad happening to bb/ rae in another story. Other than that great story and please check out Titan Initiative
| Yodaheisnot chapter 56 . 4/12/2013
One of the best stories on this site and one of the inspiration for my story I have been reading your story for awhile and just created an account because of all the inspiration you and force are worth so can read you my story and give me your thoughts please
| tatsumarusmith chapter 56 . 4/10/2013
LoL, happy to see you update. :)
Overall, nothing was out of place or poorly written. :P
I was somewhat confused with the impromptu BB and Nightwing fight and more confused by nightwings initial reaction. I mean, I understand hes cool calm and collected when he senses a fight coming, i just thought there would have been more of a bit of a feeling of surprise.(Getting tackled by a green panther while working out at an alien gym would still strike me as rather peculiar.)
So OVERALL love. Hope to see an update soon and have fun with it. :)
| Victorthe3rd chapter 56 . 4/10/2013
Awesome story as always. Definitely happy to see some dialouge happening between the main pairings...I thought Robin would be a little less cynical about hearing Starfire and Changelings side of the story. I mean he took bedding Rae so seriously, but I cant help but think in the back of his mind, he was thinking "revenge fuck". But to not talk the woman he loves and get her side...come on Rob...i thought you had more tact than that...to not turn into the jealous bf. I understandbb explanatiion to star but at the sams time...your supposed to get her side b4 making any kind of decision, not ignoring her...grieve time isnt an eternity...