|Reviews for Love in Shades of Green and Gray|
| Victorthe3rd chapter 55 . 3/3/2013
Great story as always. Glad to see the group trying to patch holes in a dire situation. And honestly, ITS ABOUT DAMN TIME. Group tension...Aint nobody got time for that! I had a feeling you would patch up Star and Rae first...now for Dick and Star, and the epic finale of Bb and Rae. Can't wait for the next update. Trying to get another reader for your story...my gf...its coming along...lol. Keep it up!
| BBLover chapter 55 . 3/3/2013
I hope you wouldn't do that to Raven... I think it would ruin the story! So far I like it this story's direction. Its sad and happy.. More like real life. This chapter was very much needed... Star & Raven now understand each other and Raven can see how remorseful Star is. Now I can't wait till Raven and Changeling have a talk. It should be very interesting. Update soon!
| tatsumarusmith chapter 55 . 3/3/2013
Darn, the feels i got from watching starfire and raven reconcile was truly heart breaking. I was overwhelmed by the sorrow, that only stare fire could feel as deeply as she did, about how she betrayed raven.
"But hurting Raven. For any reason. That burned her soul." Was actually very apt and eloquent for such a small amount of words.(LoL-btw, youre quotable. :P)
On a lighter note I must say I enjoyed how changeling managed to manhandle the task force to rebuild comms across the the tamaranian empire. I cant begin to tell you how i both dread and eagerly await to see what other tasks changeling, starfire, Nightwing, Cyborg, and Raven have to accomplish to win, or lose, the war for tamaran. I eagerly await for i expect to see epic feats of TRUE glory that would make the myths of heroic warriors such as those of greek history and chinese legend pale in comparison.
My one critique I do have though...your spelling...ive been following you for a while and youre slipping into misspelling things again. I know its few and far between but that doesnt make it an excuse, and even though your updates are phenomenally fast that still shouldnt keep you from taking at least 30 minutes to read over your work and make minor corrections.(I only chastise cause I really do enjoy your work and wish you to get out of this "rut" that you built for yourself. That and reading a streamlined story is nice too :).)
| egg1 chapter 55 . 3/2/2013
wow you did a really good job on getting raven and Starfier friends again. No complaints on that one. and to me t is really understandable what Raven said to Beast Boy. Because in the end even if it was a accientent and he didn't mean it, he really hurt her and she will have some anger there. So I can't wait for Raven and Beast Boy to talk. To be honset at first I really wanted them to get back together right away but now I want them to fight a little. I guess I'm crazy. lol
| theluckyshot chapter 55 . 3/2/2013
That was surprisingly cathartic... now there just needs to be a few more reconciliations. That being said... please proof read your next chapter. I'm no grammar Nazi, nor do I pretend to have the best grammar; however, there where quite a few errors which could have easily been fixed with no real effort. Sorry to be coming off so negative, but it was just really distracting (to me anyway), and detracted from an overall enjoyable chapter.
| TheBlueRingOfHope chapter 55 . 3/2/2013
I began reading your story last year, but have only recently developed an account with which ican comment. So yes an no, i am new, but also somewhat old. Wonderful chapter and wonderful story by the way.
| Katwizzle chapter 55 . 3/2/2013
Of course im still sticking with you. This is such a great story! I cant wait for the next chapter!
| Anonymous chapter 55 . 3/2/2013
You, good sir, are fantastic!
If reviews are required for continuation, I shall review, review, review!
You portray these characters so well, with quality and depth, and I especially love your development of Raven. It wasn't ridiculously fast-paced or illogically twisted to produce the results the writer desired, and I enjoyed re-tracking the progress you've made on each of them. Hooray for decent 'keeping-in-character' or however it's put.
(On a side-note, I also appreciate your ethics concerning the mature material, it's rare for me to see that kind of precaution, so thanks for that!)
| Arashikage1988 chapter 55 . 3/2/2013
About fucking time about fucking time you go two chapters in a row that are amazing not I want to see how you fix Changling and Raven...also the fact it seems you are going back to how use to write and seem to followed my advice in that take your time not rushing choosing the right concept.
Your dialogue is amazing I said it last chapter with the raven/Nightwing post conversation that it was good enough it didn't need the sex to be prominent or have its impact... Raven and Starfire conversation was better then the one from last chapter... And I love how you made sure Rita didnt find out it was Nightwing because how bad that would have been.
| Serenarey Chiba chapter 55 . 3/2/2013
Interesting. I'd still prefer more detail than just constant dialogue...but I suppose I'll have to deal.
When I indicated detail before, I meant describing the situation while everyone is talking. Not just giving an initial description with endless dialogue, but showing a scene that everyone can imagine. From this story, I can tell you have a picture in your head about what's going on, but the details do not transmit to the reader, really. I have to fill in the blanks, which may not be filled in with the content you're imagining.
| dablman2020 chapter 55 . 3/2/2013
loved the back to the future referance with the .88c. they needed to engage the flux capaciter lol. great story looking forward to more
| fusiontech45 chapter 55 . 3/2/2013
So the team is finally working together again. It's strained, but it's a start. I have a feeling Raven and Changeling will be the last to reconcile, seeing as how Raven can't stop insulting him and spitting on his character as a man. I'm real happy that Raven gave Starfire a chance to explain herself, as her situation wasn't normal.
Rita's a breath of fresh air in all this dancing around. Cuts to the point when necessary, but has the ability to sympathize and speak honestly. (Favorite line: "'Things' don't just 'lead to' other things. Own your decisions.")
And nice to see BB hold his own and take command like everyone knows he can. Too many people forget where he came from. Gotta be a survivor to take all that crap.
Glad to see some progress, looking forward to next installment. Nice work.
| JOHNXgambit chapter 55 . 3/2/2013
Thank gravy we finally started so healing. BB is in alpha dog mode again witch is nice to see
| The-Fantasy-Controller chapter 55 . 3/2/2013
That was amazing! I wish Changeling and Raven had more alone time to talk it out but for Starfire and Raven to talk it out is a start too. I love how you told Starfire's origin and how much sympathy Raven had that was enough for her to forgive Starfire and to hear her out. It's all coming together like you said. When are Nightwing and Starfire gonna get to talk about more...relationship wise subjects? I hope everything turns out how it's supposed to.
| Randamwriter chapter 55 . 3/2/2013
This was wonderful most joyous as are princess would say. I enjoy the backstory that came up when talking to raven. And bery enjoyed BB kicking $$ and taking charge. Also in a time of war military will really take over a college for such reason. Now the i ask wll she find out aboit raven and dicks little night.