Reviews for Love in Shades of Green and Gray
krostovikraven1 chapter 54 . 3/8/2013
it is a very ineresting relationship Nightwingand Raven have. not a "friend with benefits" kind. but they trust each other in more way than friends do. and still professional about it.

i liked this chapter very much.
krostovikraven1 chapter 53 . 3/8/2013
i like how Starfire has taken charge ofthe situation. its in her nature as a ruler and a warrior to know how. their names are so exotic, dificult to pronouce too when trying to d it at a fast pace reading lol.

even if Nightwing would have thought of Jinx for the job, what could she have done. she's not a sorceres with magic spells and potions, just a bad luck witch kinda thing. her powers are limited compared to Raven's.
krostovikraven1 chapter 52 . 3/8/2013
that was nice of Raven to talk to the kids, obigued but rewarding. at least she didnt scare anybody
krostovikraven1 chapter 49 . 3/8/2013
oohhh man. so they did break the team. (gasp)

and wow, how Rita just showed up like that. i mean, its great. very unexpected. but sweet. i hope that the team comes back together. they have a lot to work out. they still haven't addressed the issues in the first place.

oh by the way, come on! finish before July? idk, for some reason i think is still short. there is room for a lot more and you make them interact flawlessly, why not keep going. and to tell you the truth, this is the first story i read over 45 chapters and i am realy enjoying myself. i like to read and your vivid imagination keeps me engaged on the story. i didnt start to read it until perhaps a week ago or so. and perhaps with the reason that i dont like to wait. this way, i can keep reading to my hearts content (or until is really late at night and i have to have some sleep before heading to work again early the next day)
krostovikraven1 chapter 48 . 3/7/2013
oh pls dont bring Terra... in this realm is like the prohibited "T word" ... besides.. they'r in a good place. in fact, if you want to add some drama, have slade appear,or have an enhanced Dr Light to kidnap Raven, but pls, don bring ... her (growl)...

but didnt expect that! ... that was mayor. deep grounds for actually breaking the team. :O

you really went cruel on them on this chapter. sweet and sour indeed.

it all comes down to skin on skin, wether in fight or lovemaking, but really, where is the difference. by nature mammals tend to show how strong they are not only by punches but by submition. having someone under your spell just reminds your ego how powerful you can be. it can be a viceversa effect.
krostovikraven1 chapter 47 . 3/7/2013
christmas carols in march ... no so bad, in fact , turn out great. and left me with a smile at the end of the chapter.
krostovikraven1 chapter 46 . 3/7/2013
wait, so how come he's got a He-man and Skeletor figures with a Bozzlightyear ...?... they're like at least 15 years apart and Gar hasnt lived with his parents for at least five yrs and the 10 yrs before that is when the he-man show was on and he might have been barely born by then... or somewhere between 4 and 5 which at that point still was with his birth parents. how does a Bozzlightyear make it into that collection?...
sorry about the whole questioning of his toys but, chronologicaly speaking, it just doesnt make sense.

you know, his way of interpreting what happens to him when he transforms and how that affects him overall is impresive. there is after all a reason as to all his goofy and inmature ways. all in all, he knows.
krostovikraven1 chapter 45 . 3/7/2013
wow, a completly different language. so all the sounds, grunts, noises and hard or lazy looks we see is a subtle image of the real conversation you, the guys, have rightin front of our noses.
very primitive, yet simple. just like the beast. is either black or white. never in betwen? mmmmm
krostovikraven1 chapter 44 . 3/7/2013
wow!, so really how old are they. what keeps steve from aging... willing himself to not age? and that was really messed up of him, brainwash her into falling for him.

and I'm sure there is not a single wrincle on Rita's anatomy. i can understand Cliff, being a machine and all, but even the brain can grow old. eventually it would only be a memory f his personality. copy of his thoughts.
but you failed to mention how negative man came to be. i'm curious how just simple bandages can keep the radiation from emanating from him and harm everyone else. specially designed for his particular predicament i'm sure.

i've never read the comics. my first impression of the Titans was in the cartoon show.

never really found interest on comics. i'm of the belief that pictures slow down the momentum of any story becouse it distracts the minds from actually "seeing" the moving picture that literature can create when reading by ourselves.

And a talented writter can depict and explain in great detail certain or all aspects of a story in such a passion that pictures are'nt necessary to carry on the message. but of course, my respect for those who choose the comics for entertainment and inspiration. they seem to be a great vehicle of information.

with that said, i think you are one of those writters.
krostovikraven1 chapter 43 . 3/7/2013
what a goof, the prankster.
and yeah i feel her disapointment at having to sleep away from her boyfriend. i would too,specially with him. but nothing beats the akwardness of meeting the parents for the first time.
krostovikraven1 chapter 42 . 3/6/2013
and yet you would have gone into a full detailed explanation of it had you not thought about it twice.
krostovikraven1 chapter 41 . 3/6/2013
aaawwww... this chapter is so sweet, i dont care if i get any cavities. you can really fill my need of fluff to my hearts content. thank you.
krostovikraven1 chapter 40 . 3/6/2013
i really liked that. she had to work hard to get him back and it paid off. the bit with the director and his not being impressed with her display ws hilarious.
krostovikraven1 chapter 38 . 3/6/2013
OMG what an idiot she is. :O i am ready to slap her silly, demon powers forgotten.
krostovikraven1 chapter 36 . 3/6/2013
man! so you go thru the detailed foreplay and just stopped cold turkey. thats just cruel. i mean c'mon. i know the website's limiting writters to mainly teen apropiate but still. but i've read other stories that are actually very detailed in a scene like that. idk how far they would have to go for the website to actually shut them down but they got the whole scene down. anyway. otherthan the screeching halt of the mental forplay,i'de say this chapter is incredible. and yes . i double pinky swear i'm old enough to read as such... XD
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